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kraite 1/19/05 . chapter 2
where can i find more your stories? expecialy about Tam' gotchi'?
Kimmuryiel 1/28/04 . chapter 2
I think it would be scary to see a Predator kiss...
Kimmuryiel 1/28/04 . chapter 1
I think it would be scary to see a Predator smiel...
alex9 1/17/04 . chapter 2
I like this a great deal!
Eddykadabra 3/24/03 . chapter 1
Cool

Tell us about the sex.
KEEO 3/16/03 . chapter 1
Now this is quite an original idea and I think it's worth writing another chapter for it. Well, I'm off joining AlienvsPredator2: Primal Hunt servers for some hunting. But with the Alien, the Predator aint my true favorite, bye.
Weirdlet 1/19/03 . chapter 1
Fascinating. The grammar and spelling was a bit difficult to figure out, and this masks some parts that I'm sure would be interesting if I could interperet them, but behind that veil is a really beautiful story. Please, continue to write and improve!
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