AW this is a great fic i can't wait for the next chapter

Really great fic! However, Lasselanta would be just one-quarter human, wouldn't she? If her Grandma (elf) Marries a human and they have a baby, then their baby is half-human. If that baby marries an elf (full elf) then their child would be one-quarter elf, not one-half. Just thought I'd clarify that. ^^

Hi there,
This is a good story -- it deserves more reviews! looking forward to the meeting between L. and Thranduil...

You could use with a real evlish name for your character. So far as I can tell it has no meaning aside from "lass" meaning leaf. Go here to devise a realistic name for her [remove spaces from url]: http://realelvish.tripod. com/sindarin_names. htm

You might want to change Celebrindal's name. Celebrindal was the epessë of Idril and Elves generally did not reuse names, let alone take the name of a very famous elf to use for an animal. How about Celebrindail, means "silverfeet", rather than "silverfoot", and since your wolf has quite a few more feet than Idril did it would be an appropriate change to the name and would be almost the exact same meaning, but would not be stealing it from Idril.

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Aww ... they have to leave. But they get to go on a road trip! She should go all the way to Mirkwood ... wouldn't Thranduil just have a cow?
I'm still trying to figure out her story. Guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter to find out more! =)

Please update! I really like this story.

I'm really enjoying your story so far. Update soon!
A~R

YAY! NEW CHAPTER! *celebration and confetti* I'm so proud! *tear*
Aww! Legolas' modesty is so adorable ... *hug* An interesting portrayal of him, too. Lassa's so independent and headstrong, it's no wonder she confuses him. Especially if he's used to those Mirkwood ... *cough* ... ah ... persons. Yes. Persons. That was the word.
Gimli catches on quick. It's surprising. Who would've thought it of a dwarf? =)
'Till next chapter!
- Strawberry -

Please update soon! Don't make me wait for the next chapter too long!

Gah! Freaky ... HOW DARE THEY SLASH GIMLI'S PONY? *grr*

Wonderful chapter! I'm so happy! You updated ... the story continues! *sigh* 'Lassa's so fascinating ... very lovely new character! Many-faceted personality ... I like! UPDATE SOON!

Much love, and 'till next chapter!

~Strawberry

P.S. Don' worry about your long-missed updatey-ness, we still love you! : ) LoL!

Great job chicka. Keep up the good work, and don't take so long to update!

*sigh* Another beautiful chapter ...
I loved it! Poor Lasselanta ... Thranduil can't be THAT mean ... can he? Ah! I must know!

May the Valar curse writer's block and all it's evil forms,

~Strawberry

WELL? You have not yet updated! I'm trying to give you a million reviews annoying you to update! HOW CAN I GIVE YOU A MILLION REVIEWS ANNOYING YOU TO UPDATE IF YOU HAVE BUT TWO CHAPTERS? *sticks Legolas in front of moniter and he gives puppy dog face* Can you resist? Can you REALLY?

Legolas: PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!

lol Anyway, this story is AWESOME! You can't just leave us! Keep going--the suspense is killing me! *dies*

~Strawberry ;)

Aww . you gotta update! You've got really good writing skills, and this storyline is awesome! KEEP GOING! =)

Just as good as the first. I can't wait to read the next. Hurry up and post! Please! Do it for those of us with no life.