Same with it predessor, I am going to post a review from the first time this story was posted.

Kaji: This and its predecessor have been the most awesome pieces of fiction I have ever read. It could still use some work, however. For example, at some points, you have exceedingly long paragraphs. And at other points, you have one-sentence paragraphs. That makes it a bit difficult to get through. Despite this, yours are the best stories I've come across in all my days (about 5500+ of them).

Bravo! Again! What a great story! It took me a couple of weeks to read it (not going on the internet all the time)but it was worth the wait! Very cool!! I wish I could be in this story...Anywayz, out of time. Great story!

-The other Erin
P.S First to sign!!