This was great, a very unique story line I rarely see. I'm surprised you didn't add it as another chapter to the first one, though, because I recall seeing many 'please update's in the reviews of the first part, and they might not realize you posted this if they added it to their story alert.

A truly wonderful story! So well constructed and so sweet.
Thank you for posting it.
And I love the mystery of the main character - it was perfect for the story

Oh my goodness.

I think I've told you quite a few times how much I enjoy our writing, but it can never hurt to say it again.

This was absolutely wonderful. It was insightful, it was sweet, it was sad, it contained Percy Weasley (which automatically puts you ahead of the game!) Hm. Anyway.

Your nameless narrator vaguely reminds me of the narrator from Daphne Du Maurier's _Rebecca_, which is most definitely a good thing. She's naive, in a way, but then not... I can't explain it. But rest assured, I do love her.

Oh, I don't know what else to say. Great Job!