Please, update...

This is one of the funniest fics I've read in a while, and I find myself having to submit a comment, if only to thank you for all the laughs. You have a talent for the well-turned phrase, and the sequence with the doctor using all sorts of euphemisms for Mamoru being impotent was hilarious. "Your hotdog has no ketchup" was a killer.

I normally don't go for multicrosses (they tend to get too messy, as the author attempts to throw too many toppings into the okonomiyaki) but this is one exception to the rule I'm glad to have stumbled on. I'll be checking out a couple of your other stories after I submit this review.

I'm hoping you'll get back into writing sometime, with this story in particular. You have a flair for the comically absurd (or is that the absurdly comic?) and I'd love to read more of your work.

Please update son 9.9

you should updata

"There was no effect except the monster suddenly had an urge for a hotdog."

Gosh, I wish I had written this sequence.
I did my own Senshi-bashing parody, Ranma's Ascention, but I think this is funnier.

Outrageous! Whimsical! Irrelevant! Irreverent! Unpredictable! Amusing!
I like it.
Mike

Good stuff. Keep going and try to finish this sometime.

Not too shabby. I've certainly enjoyed most of what you've written so far.

My main criticism is that the grammar/ spelling is a little lacking. This could be easily remedied with a prereader/ editor who has some experience with said fields. It shouldn't be to hard to find somebody if you advertise on your profile.

Speaking of profile, I hope everything is alright. I've been there, done that (who am I kidding...I'm still there). The priority shouldn't go to fanfics, it should go towards...well, living. Food and shelter are rather requisite for that. That being said, I hope you write some more when you get a chance. I've seen fics make a comeback after being dead for a long, LONG time, so I still have hope for you. ^^

Once again, thanks for the fic.

I like the story. The differences between this and your others make for an entirely new and enjoyable experience. I look forward to more.

Heh heh heh. Good work, though it could use some more proofreading.

My son pointed your story out to me as very good. He was right!

I have to ask if you are going to use the oldest recorded method of creating were creatures? The bite and/or scratch (remember the torn up bedding). Because of the method of removing the spell that was keeping the kids from going were before thier 18th birthday, it would be very easy to introduce the effect. The only real question would be wheather it was an accident or intentional.

That might give Ranma more sexial staying power since it would effect Shanpoo right away (again, remember the bedding), and you did say she was the one, who, as an amazon, affected his energy the most.

Hey, I think you hinted kind of openly Ranma may hay slept with "all" of the senshi the night Ukyo may have joined the trio. O_O Could Usagi already be?

When I discussed this with my son, he also pointed out that it was documented that pregnancies between were and the non-were was a rare occurance, at least in the fiction and fanfic's we have read.

Um. I don't know that you have ever said exactally what Nodoka does for a living. Since she has suggested bringing in the older Tendo girls into the harem, a job might be one way to attract them and get them away from the Tendo house and the freeloading fathers.

Um again, a job offer might be a way to get Akani away and perhaps into some counciling (well, it is a thought). But I would never want her as a mate or "deffinatly NOT" a mother. A "supervised" babysitter, maybe.

(Evil Grin) Put the fathers on a stipend\alowence (like the british) that will cover the house costs, liveing costs etc with a (Amizon Elder) live-in cook and maid who will control the money with only $5. to $10. (whatever the equivalent small amount in yen is) a week for saki, a month if they screw it up. The House and dojo are the collaterol for good behavior, bad behavior = bye, bye limited easy living, hello support them selves.

Wonder if Setsuna will get that wand back in Nabiki's presence and trap her into useing it (looking forward to seeing what you dress (or undress) the cracked Jupiter moons senshi in)?

I think there are a lot more possibilities, but I almost face planted into my keyboard, so I think I'll let "you: continplate them. Night, and thanks for the very good read.


May the MUSE be with you!

*Sigh* Why don't you update? I ORDER you to update. I need more. Please, don't make us wait another year for the next chapter.

Ha-ha, love it, please continue with this piece, (no more wife’s though, I doubt Ranma could take it). It sounded like you were toying with the idea of introducing the diggers, I can’t really say anything on that, you’ve got a big enough cast already, and I don’t think you need more fiancés, but introducing the diggers adds many possibilities.

cant wait to see the next chapter that is if your still writing for it that is

Interesting ending note on this chapter. I like Ami's reaction to being spotted. That disarming pun was kinda bad though.

Keep the chapters coming!