Hey this is a good story update soon

Dis is a really tite story! who eva sent u dat flame is an ass! lol well keep ritin and ill keepin readin cya at skewl

this is really good_ please write more soon_ Bye Bye!

this is GREAT! you just HAVE to continue soon_

Please continue asap!

wow, this is good. I can't wait unitl you put up the next chapter. C Ya.

Okay, I'm in a weird mood and on a personal crusade; to eradicate poor spelling in a summary! This really irks me for some reason and I'm sorry that you fell victim to it. Knoeknow, okay? That's it, simple, pure, nice. If you wish to recieve reviews please spell your summary correctly, I personally will not read a story if there is a blatant error in the summary, I figure if they can't get the summary right the rest of the story has no hope. However I am not simply mindlessly bashing you on spelling, I actually read your chapter as well. I must say I was relieved to find proper spelling in your story, so you have that at least going for you. I like your general story, you seem to have a plot in mind with a strong original character, but I highly suggest that you put this down as an AU (alternate universe) story if you wish to stay alive. LOTR fans can get really fiesty and protective over their characters, and you have made some big changes. In case you haven't read the appendices or the books even, Aragorn and Arwen had one son, not a daughter. And half-elves are normal so they wouldn't have a scar, Arwen herself was the daughter of Elrond Halfelven (hint in last name) and that was how she GAVE UP her immortality, she did not extend it to Aragorn. Alright then, sorry on the history lesson, but I think you should be aware of this so that you can at least protect yourself against other readers. Please post an AU and you will have yourself a perfectly acceptable story.