It was a really good story, glad Voltaire got him comeuppance. The ending was really kawaii.

good job! i LOVED it!

100 REVEIWS! . GO BITTERSWEET!(or Relinquished. wadeva)

but you could do a sequel... where it all gets icky and turns out either really gd where you save his sanity again or stays icky and... put it this way... there wudn't b life in him to screw up anymore.

i read a Kai death fic before... my reaction shocked me, i cried, i cried alot and it was only a story, lol. try it onegai?

Looking back on my reviews, I realised that some people don't like their stories compared to soaps. And that I was rather annoying about that.
I didn't mean to be! I just have a bad habit of saying annoying or tactless things about stuff without even realizing it. I have a good motive but it just comes out wrong! Because, you see, it never sounds bad until it's out. I think everyone's experienced that before and holy shlamoly (it's a phase I'm going through to say that) does it ever suck! I guess what I'm getting at is that I'm sorry if you were annoyed (*sarcastically* gee, what are the odds?) and/or POed/offended by them bits o' stupidity I suppose you could call horrible reviews.
Whoa this is getting long! Sorry I just have a talkative mood today.
Ellen.

Aw...no sequel?That sucks...but it's your story, you know...do whatever you like.
This was pretty short. I mean, I'm reading a story that's 49 chaps long and not finished yet, so of course a 10 chap story is kinda shor tot me...no offense.
No Tala? Oh well. Tala stories are good though. Coz he's our favorite redhead with blue eyes.
Johnny-boy's our fav redhead with amethyst eyes.
Ellen.

Dear God...O.O;;
THAT was UNEXPECTED!
Aw...Poor Kai has no family left anymore!;_;
Holy turtles, lol...tpyical Maxie!
Ellen.

;_; He still thinks she's alive...aw...
H-ok...this very soap opera-y plot went un-soap opera-y when Kate died. Soo...yea.
It's still good though.
Ellen.

OH. MY. GAWD.
She's DEAD. Dead. DEAD!DeAd!
Kai: FOR GOD'S SAKE!
Sorry it's just...oh my god...oh MY god...
Poor Kai...that's so horrible...Voltaire's a meanie!(Believe me, I would call him MUCH worse'n that...)
Ellen.

OK this is GOOD!SOAP OPERA TO THE MAX!
Aw...no 'NEXT TIME ON's? Oh well...:(
I don't like Cyber-Tala. The only part like of that episode is seeing Tala in shorts :P.
Ellen.

Well whoopdedoo and goodiegoodiegumdrops...it's confrontation time. Man I cannot wait!
This is like a soap opera, what with the betrayals and 'NEXT TIME ON's.
Ellen.

NO, Tyson, Kai does't have a mother. He was brought by a stork. God...
Ouch, poor Kai's mom. I feel so sorty for her, but then again, what does she expect?
OK, freaky, I know a soap opera that has like almost EXACTLY the same plot (or...one of the main plots).
Interesting...
Ellen.

whe!*bounces off the walls*You know that feeling you get if you spin around and then fall on the grass and ur head just keeps spinning? i dunno why but thats what happy endings make me feel. Hehe. Absolutely fantastic, beautiful, heart-wrenching/heart warming, amazing fic! I just spent a full hour and a half reading it, looky, its 1 am...hmm...maybe i should sleep...i'm just bursting with happiness though . When you read a good long full fic in one night, thats what happens. I'm emotionnaly full lolz. Thnx so much for being so dedicated and finishing a ficcy, its so hard to find complete fics these days-.-, well enough of my ranting.
You are wonderful!
Kai is a God.
What more can i add?
Keep writing !
Lain

Well I guess I can't say write more. That was a awsome ending -. I look forward to your other stories.

Ja ne

Meru

WAH! THAT WAS SO WONDERFUL! Okay, I'm not even going to torture anyone this review...

Voltaire: Let me out of here!

Bro: Ep! A cockroach!

Me: ...because Voltaire and my brother got locked in the basement by accident. . Anyway, this is one of my favorite fics EVER, and certainly my favorite Beyblade fic, and yes I will definitely be checking out your other fics! Thanks so much for making me feel warm inside. Now, I gotta go get a crobar and let the boys out. Sayonara ja-ne!