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| QTR 2006-07-25 ch 2, | abuseDamn it, this is awesome. I read the first chapter and now I'm hooked. I loved this line: "Good God. Two grown men, a door, and a one hundred and ten pound woman; the math was easy to calculate." |
| Ashley Booth 2006-05-06 ch 13, | abuseAmazing story . I love how you captured grissom's personalaty he is hard to do . good job, strike that womnderful job . keep it up Ashley Booth |
| Tiffany 2004-01-02 ch 13, anon. | abuseA great addition to last year's troubles. I really enjoyed the read. Thanks a bunch. -tiff |
| tosha 2003-12-19 ch 13, anon. | abuseHoly hell-o! That was pure enjoyment. It was longer than I like but b/c of the pov's I didn't notice. You're awesome writer! Can't wait for the sequel! (there is one isn't there?) -Tosha |
| Crazyangel1 2003-03-05 ch 13, | abuseAw. I’m a hopeless romantic but you made me drool over a simple exchange of keys. You’re turning me into a mushy idiot. I loved this story but most of all I LOVED the way you ‘end’ it because it doesn’t feel like an end, is more like the beginning. Great work! Angel. |
| justaredherring 2003-03-04 ch 13, | abuseOh! Oh! Sequel the first time you get the chance! I'm slightly dissapointed it ended just with a reconciliation (what about the love angst?! ;D ), but it is a satisfying ending anyway. I love this story, and I hope you do write its sequel soon. :) |
| Duckfeat 2003-03-04 ch 13, | abuseNope. Can't be over. It's just not allowed. Ok, I think that's a little bit of denial on my part. How many ways can I say that this story rocked! I also loved chapter 13 (I refuse to say the ending). |
| Peggie 2003-03-04 ch 13, anon. | abuseIt's .over? I want more! I don't want it to end! (And isn't that the sign of a really good story!) |
| thousand-miles 2003-03-04 ch 13, | abuseLove Grissom's insecurity! You really know that man, Dana. I'm scared you're stealing him away from me.LOL "He's not supposed to be dating someone."?How can that man think that? He neds to date Sara and if not Sara well then me!! I am so happy that he's not running. He has finally learnt something. Ice cream eating.me too!"There was never anybody but you" Why does he have to take that back?? I thought that man had just learnt something. Stupid, stupid GRissom! OH She's giving him the key!!YEAH the key to her heart! NO.I don't want this to end! Why? Why? Why? Why does this have to end? I loved this so much Dana. It was just so awesome and I'm sad it's over.I loved it so much!! You are the best, Queen Dana! Geena |
| thousand-miles 2003-03-04 ch 12, | abuseGOD Dana you have shocked me again!! Damn, what a AWESOME chapter. Those emotions were so.heavy and so real. I loved it. I loved everything. Sara's doubts about what to tell him and what not. This was so good! Geena |
| Tolli 2003-03-03 ch 13, | abuseawe no goodnight kiss? Lol I'm hopeless. Great job! I liked the different views presented. At first I didn't want you to switch to Grissom but then I couldn't help but like reading what he thought, then I wouldn't want to hear Sara again but I would like her too again. Suffice to say I was pleased with this story :) If you make a sequal that would be great but whatever you do keep writing :) |
| Melindotty 2003-03-03 ch 13, | abuseso sweet! |
| Crazyangel1 2003-03-01 ch 11, | abuseThe 11th chapter, wow. I like the way you combine humour with angst. Like one minute I’m laughing and I’m sad in the next. And the frying pan was priceless! I’m dying to know what is going to happen next. Angel. |
| Duckfeat 2003-02-28 ch 11, | abuseRock on. More than awesome! 'The rules. What were they again?' Classic internal Grissom. |
| justaredherring 2003-02-27 ch 11, | abuseLife is short, break the rules! Breaking into an apartment. not what I'd expect from Gris, but a clever maneuver. ;) But poor him, being hit with a frying pan. I guess the two of them will have matching bruises the next day at work! Wonder what the others will think. ;D Can't wait for the next part, says the G/S hungry reader! |