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Ginnia
2008-03-28 . chapter 3
I like how you explained Ania's situation. I wonder how Ania will cope when she no longer experences events that are in the books she read. Maybe she will get the gift of knowing like she will know what would have happen as if she had read the books. I wonder why is Ania there. While the weave do not effect her like others whose lives are threads in the pattern she can still effect what is going on because she knows what will happen. Maybe you can make Ania the Creator's chosen. The Dark One has chosen called the Forsaken so why can't the Creator have chosen. If you don't want her to be a Chosen she can be a type of Ta'veren, one who have a unique Creator given function, she can be the Ta'veren of Fate for example. She can work to change things to the way they should be. She can save lives, change events and in doing so help the Light win. There has to be a reason why she is there besides just hanging back and watching the events of the books unfold around her. Did you know that someone will write the the last Wheel of Time book called In Memory of Light, which is currently due to come out in 2009. I hope you will take up writting this story again.
Twilight Killer Reborn
2003-12-30 . chapter 3
Nice story...
Excellent descriptions, I love your use of words.
I find it fascinating to have words such as "thou, thy" etc in this tale. Never thought the people in Robert Jordan's world would speak the language used by the humans in our modern world centuries ago.
It reminds me a bit of David Edding's writings. He used such language in the Belgariad and Malloreon series as well.
Rikiki
2003-09-30 . chapter 3
Not bad, surprisingly. I was a bit worried I'd found my first WoT MS, but Ania seems to be under control. *In the background a faint "Mother's milk in a cup!" is heard, presumably from somebody wanting to... deal with the Sue.* I'd be careful about affecting canon or letting the CC know too much, though.
Delphine Pryde
2003-09-24 . chapter 3
Very cool.
starborn
2003-09-09 . chapter 3
good chapter...nice idea too, how she cant effect anything not given to her.
update soon!
Mad Psyentist / Korogi
2003-09-05 . chapter 3
Wow... such a long delay between updates. I'm so glad you updated 'cuz I was REALLY loving this story!! And I love it when Mat gets pestered. *pinches cheeks of certain ta'veren* Hope your next update is soon!!
starborn
2003-07-16 . chapter 2
NO! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME! 'meh' is MY WORD! MINE! I TELL YOU MINE!

hehehe

mwahaha

I LOVE 'rand-land' fics! although i agree that the name is a tincy bit...odd.

UPDATE!

*STARBORN*
Guardian
2003-04-17 . chapter 2
This is the first WoT Fic I've read. I love it! Please keep writing, I'm very anxious to see what Ania's trip to the Aelfinn will bring to the story.
Dreamspinner K'Chona
2003-03-29 . chapter 2
MORE!
Dreamspinner K'Chona
2003-03-29 . chapter 1
Cool! Goodgood!
Abigail-Nicole
2003-03-21 . chapter 2
I love it!UPdate! UPdate! UPwith the UPdates!

I'll tell you what I tell everybody (chant with me, now): "ADD MORE EMOTION!"

Better, Love it dear!

Who!

What will she do when she gets past CoT? Hm...will it go that far? That's a lot of typing!
Keep writing and update soon!
Random Dragonrider
2003-03-14 . chapter 2
WOW! I love it! Definately not your run-of-the-mill-insert-fangirl-into-world-where-she-can-fall-for-the-main-character story, and I love it. Very funny. I was grinning the whole way through - it takes something extremely funny or Monty Python to make me laugh. You could perhaps make the characters more like themselves. Rand was great, just the right balance of arrogance and uncertainty for this time of the series. Moiraine, though... well, my memory of her isn't that great, but from what I can remember, she wasn't so easygoing. Otherwise, I find it difficult to fault. Good job.
Yunyin
2003-03-04 . chapter 2
I like it! It'd be great if you could make the chapters longer, but anyway write more!
seishi
2003-03-04 . chapter 2
omg i love this story! please continue! nice comments about a mary sue in the story. I love people who can make fun of themselves.
Mad Psyentist / Korogi
2003-03-02 . chapter 2
Yay! An update! Oh, I really like this story! heh heh. the inner monologues about the Mary Sue characters are quite funny.

Update soon!
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