Reviews for Down With the Sickness

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Silver Lady7 2008-03-22 ch 15,	abuseGreat story, well-written and all. Adventure, action, even a little bit of humour. Better still, finally Yamcha and Tien have a chance to show what they´re made of.
Sarah aka Vega 2008-03-06 ch 15,	abuseWow, reading this fic was like reading an action packed martial arts movie. Great work, wonderful characterizations and I LOVED the ending. Poor Yamcha, or lucky Yamcha... evil chuckles
Raditz Silver 2008-01-30 ch 1,	abuseIt's cool so far, i'm gonna watch it, also i'll give better reviews :P
writer6886 2006-07-09 ch 15,	abuseGreat story. I loved how you placed the minor characters in making them the heroes. Transforming Yamcha in to a wolf was an amazing twist. Not to mention Yamcha and Pelegrino getting together. Onething truely bothers me about this whole story though. Theres no sequel. Over All 5 out of 5 stars. Great story
final flash 2006-02-26 ch 15, anon.	abusegreat story, great characterisation, great decriptive paragraphs and fight scenes. my only criticism is that the fight scenes dragged on a little. keep it up!
storm-of-insanity 2005-10-31 ch 15,	abuseman your fight scenes were AWSOME. i mean they were BRILLIANT. they were so vivid, i could see them perfectly :D GREAT JOB i loved the bit when yamcha was telling piccolo that they should pick up so twins. that was really funny. and when tien told piccolo that he was going to give him a long talk on snake way about the definition of 'surprisingly good'. i like a lot of other stuff but the list would be WAY TOO LONG excellent plot as well. everything linked up and made sense
Aukai 2004-01-17 ch 15,	abuseThat story was amazing. I thought of something too. The Auto Mutation syndrome reminds me of rabies. That would have been funny if the antidote was a simple rabies shot. lmao! that last chapter was so funny! they seem perfect for each other. will there be a sequel. maybe even a lemon for the next scene. goes supersaijin I NEED MORE! ~Aukaiosama
Aukai 2004-01-11 ch 9,	abuseGood story so far. I cab sense it building up to a surprise twist and a fight. Keep it up!
Losiento 2003-10-31 ch 1,	abuseThis is incredible.
Jessi Lynn 2003-09-11 ch 15,	abuseWow. This is even better than the other one. Again, very fluid writing, language that suits the story. Good characterization, especially impressive for characters rarely in fanfiction. You mixed a little bit of technology in with the story, which was interesting and different. You took a cliché of fanfiction and made it original, with a lot of twists. It shows that thought was put into the concept, you get the impression that there’s even more than what you’re actually saying. It has definate depth. Now that we finally get to meet the real Pelegrino, I’ve got to say she isn’t you’re typical OC. Very funny and unique. She’s got a sense of humor, and she’s very blunt. I can’t wait to see more of her! And now for the utmost compliment I can give you: You did such a good job with the action sequences that I actually read them. For me, that’s very rare. I usually barely skim. Also, you managed the difficult feat of inserting a little bit of humor into the action, which is hard to pull off. Once again you’ve managed to impress me, Crash. Overall you did a wonderful job! I’m going to read more when you post it, despite the assignment being done. Keep it up!
Thunk 2003-09-02 ch 15,	abuse* It was a pretty short list of people..." Pelegrino hopped off the counter and laid a hand on Yamcha's shoulder. "You're on the list. You're here. You cook. You'll do!" * lol! I just don't know how to respond to that last chapter, but to shake my head and chuckle. ;) Persistent, wasn't she! But how funny is it that you flipped the whole gender cooking thing? That old saying, "The way to a man's heart is through his stomach" is totally applicable, here. Cracks me up. But I tell ya...there IS something sexy about a guy that can cook! And with her being Saiyan and all... LOL! A natural attraction! Certainly a fun light note to end such an action-packed story on. I laughed when she was all, "If I do this, then they'll kill me. If I do that, then they'll kill me. If I..." That was great. I totally dug this, Crash. This whole fic. I might have to use some of your phrasing later. You had some good word combos in there. Loved it!
Thunk 2003-09-02 ch 14,	abuseMan. I could never write something like this. What a fight. And it was cool to see Tien resort to the old Kaoi-ken. You really have put our human fighters in a scenario where THEY were the ones forced to step up. And since there was no other choice, they had. Kinda gives me a vibe of who would have been the strongest, had the Saiyans not ever been there to catch everyone's backs.
Thunk 2003-09-02 ch 13,	abuseDude. This is SO your niche, my friend. What a scene, with all of them together. The dialogue was great, and so was the team work. IMAGINE THAT! TEAMWORK! What a novel concept! Something DBZ as a series always neglects. I'd say more, but I'm too into this. Must read how the hell you're going to save these people...
Thunk 2003-09-02 ch 12,	abuseOH COOL!! You turned Yamcha into A wolf!! RAD! You have no idea how badly I want to see this story drawn up in an anime... The action would be amazing to watch.
Thunk 2003-09-02 ch 11,	abuseI really enjoyed the dialogue between Vegeta an Chi Chi. You just don't see those two interact very often. And I realize how smart it was for you to send the Saiyans off planet. Removed them from the crisis, so we could rely on the human characters. And the action with Piccolo Tien, Yamcha, and the Saiyan...WOW. Good stuff. My eyes were glued.

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