wow! this is like, i can't even describe it! keep up the good work! ^_^

Hey, wonderful fic! You are a great writer! ^-^

"When a child is born of the earth, he is neither human, youkai nor god."
what about a monkey-rock?

Oh...its so cool!! Il ove the way you portray goku as the innocent and vulnerable child he is. Just like a young child who has no words with which to speak but has feelings and emotion that far surpases other's genius. And is able to fully grasp the true meaning of life.(getting overly poetic again ^_~) Tonikaku, Ganbatte Solanaceae-san!

Oh!This is just WONDERFUL!!I've never seen anything as good as this, your works are indeed rare.There is just no words for describing how much I LOVE your work. Do you mind if I take a little of your work?This is just too beautiful for words.I hope to see more of this soon.

Beautiful. Very nice imagery. I'm sad that it's over so quickly.

gads. bloody good one-shot, if it is one. i hope the story that follows does it justice, if there is one.

"There is just being. And it is enough."

I love that line. ^_^.
My continuity circuits point out that Goku was born at night (saw the full moon, and thought it was the sun), but I enjoyed the fic so much that I'm not complaining ^___^.

Beautiful. This is very poetic, I enjoyed this even though it was rather short.

Wauzieeeeeeee!!! Great fic!!! Will you continue, or was this a on-going fic???? But this fic is very interesting. Love Goku!!! He is soo cute, but lonely.....

Huh? What? Nani? Umm... Heh? Wha? Uh... My head hurts...

That was lovely and succinct. A fic that doesn't concentrate on the "bakasaru" aspect of Goku, but focuses on his true nature is pretty rare and a very nice change. ^^

um...short?

*whistles* Nice. Interesting fic you have.

wow...this is a different portrayal of Goku. original, if i may say so! it's poetic. it's great! i like the line: "You are alone, but know nothing of loneliness. For there is no such thing as solitude for one who understands the language of nature."

great fic!

huggz,
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