Does this story relate to the wild wild-mages in Hanging On?

It sounded sorta similar.

Great job though. One thing, at the very begging, it says 'oyu' instead of 'you' but it's not in the actuall poem so it doesn't distract from the piece.

Shang Leopard

I have a question. Was that a poem about the People, or was it about wild mages like Daine who lost themselves to their magic?

Oh, so well done.

That was my first Tamora Pierce's Tortall fanfiction and I am well impressed. I hope that all of the rest of the fanfictions I read based off her works are this good. It might be sure but, that doesn't mean it can't be good.

"It's really good," says Thea.

Wow. that was beautiful, powerful, and really really cool. keep writing poetry. you have a definite talent for it.

This is a very cool poem! I have only read this much of your work but if the others are this good then you are doing better thatn most of us. Wild Magic is one of my favorite books and I appreciate your efforts in making such a neat piece of work. Kudos to you!

-San

Really nice, soul haunting poetry! Wonderfull!

I'm kind of confused. Is this about real animals or real people or is it about the halfling things you have in Hanging On? Whatever it is, it's good. Just maybe you could explain what it's supposed to be about in the summary or before you actually write the poem.

Once again a very good poem. I reallly like it alot! You're very good at poetry and stories. _

wow! that was really good! It was so-oh sweet! I love it!

Sooooooo cool! I loved it!

goodgoodgood. that's it. really good.

Wonderful!

What a brilliant poem!

BTW, I loved Hanging on!