I enjoyed this story. I liked your original characters and some of the description was very good.

Just in case it helps in future, I should probably tell you that I did stumble occasionally on the inconsistent use of tenses, and that some of the dialogue was perhaps a little awkward. On the other hand, I loved the imagination and detail that went into the story.

It was interesting to see the International Rescue team so utterly dependent on other people, and to find out the reason for the problem in the first place. Thanks for posting a good story.

Great story I loved it

Yay! I loved it!
cya
DK

Wow that was amazing. I was on the edge of seat the majority of the time. I really enjoyed every second of the story. Great from beginning to end.

Hey, I've read your story some time ago, and just bumped into it again, making me think whether I had actually reviewed it... I didn't. So just now: This is a great story! Thanks for writing it!

An excellent story - loved the way the townspeople all pitched in to help IR - reversing the normal role of things.

Lovely ending. Really enjoyed this story. Do another one soon, okay?

Great story. Loved the ending. Happy to see Virgil recovering. The sign was a great closer. Looking forward to your next story!

Great story, and loved the ending with the wooden plaque. Walt and Jerry were two of the best characters I've read in in an IR fanfic. The story really flowed.Well done!

awww....such a good wrap up..this was one awsome story... i loved the ending....

cant wait for your NEXT :)

Oh, wow, what a GREAT story! I think it was fantastic, and I know what you mean about it just flowing from your fingers...same thing with me! I must say I really enjoyed the John-saving-Virgil part of the storyline. It really is great to see them interact when we don't see much of it on the show (if any!). I can't wait to see what you come up with next! :)

Another cliffhanger.Has Brains discovered sabotage? This is a really well written fanfic with plenty of action and an excellent plot. I think the medical descriptions really add to the realism too. Please don't wait too long to update.

Finally, I have been trying to leave a review since Chapt. 13 and ff.net wouldn't let me do so.
Where to begin....This is fantastic! I noticed you've done your medical research which adds to the realism of your fic. I am so thankful Virgil was not killed, but as he's not out of the woods yet, I'm still nibbling my fingernails.
Please don't keep us waiting too long to find out just who was behind the explosion! You haven't left us with a cliff-hanger in a few chapters, so I was surprised to see one!

Keep up the great work!

Lady P

Another brilliant chapter, emotive with the visiting scenes. Keep up this great piece of work!

WHAT!? what happened to thunderbird 2? what happened what happened? sabotage? who knows? Don't leave us hanging too long!!