Hilarious. When you first had Steve and Jesse come to Mark all covered in red, I suspected ketchup; but hot sauce was even funnier. Thanks, Beth palladino

LMAO. A little gem. I must admit that if that happened at my supermarket, I'd never complain about doing the shopping.

I loved it! Funny! I can't really think of anything I'd change.
Just keep writing!

T'Karish

They argue just like Ash and Misty!*laughs at sight of the 4 of them*

Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!

That was great! Cute, in a way!

Another great story, I love these. The announcement for the supermarket crew was just wonderful. More please.
Tracy

A really fun and enjoyable story; keep the series going!

I can only really echo what everyone else has already said! An excellent character study with some great humour. Looking forward to reading more of your work soon!

Hilarious!!!!! I loved the by-play between Jess and Steve...without all the angst, ect that usaully comes with fanfic stories. It was a good switch to have Jess playing the "babysitter" and not being the one at deaths door or something. I love stories that have those two acting like overgrown kids!!!!!

What a hilarious story! As I was reading, I could see the whole scene play out in my mind. Steve and Jesse can get into trouble without trying very hard, can't they??

Loved the part where Jesse sent the cab away and Steve's reaction- perfect. In fact I loved all of it, the interactions were just right. More please.
(How about seeing how much trouble they could get into going jogging or surfing together? Just a suggestion. Can't wait to see where you go next.)
Judith

This was a very cute story! And there was no need to apologize. Sometimes, it is nice to see a story with the humor of life, instead of the intense drama. And you captured it perfectly!

This was a fun story.
A veriation on the wrong shopping cart: When I was little, I was Christmas shopping with my mother. On a crowded sidewalk I had let go of her hand for a moment while I was looking at something in a window. I reached my hand back into Mom's and, noticing some hesitation, looked up into the face of a surprised stranger. My mother was close-by and, after drying my tears, used the experience to remind me to keep a tight hold of her hand when out in public.
Annie

I loved it! This was so funny and I wish they could film this one. Great story!