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| thomas 2008-09-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love bettle metallix and I think in the next chapter you should add Little Arthur Fortunesin the next chapter and put me in all of the bettle borg metallix stories and I was thinking that you should have lil art fortunes move to charterville and meet another kid named Thomas J thomas |
| Chris 2008-04-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is terribly difficult to read, as it's one big block of type. Please break it up into paragraphs. The punctuation is good, but you need to get some help with layout. |
| Shinzochi 2008-03-20 ch 6,  | abuseThis is a very original story and i really like it, i am really eager to read the next chapter. |
| FluffleNeCharka 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseBlock text, Mary Sue, bad grammar, lack of grasp on the English language, no knowledge of canon or fanon, and some of the worst dialogue I've ever seen. I say this a lot to the meth-using writers/Suethors of fanfiction dot net. But I want you to know, I (and MANY other people) mean it when I make the statement 'you deserve to be here' (minus the spaces, in case you couldn't figure it out due to the fact your IQ is single-digit): htt p:// comm unit y.live journa m/mary sues/1 7425 11.ht ml#c utid1 |
| Vixey-Dimera 2004-10-21 ch 6, | abusehey Jenashu, you are such a waste waste waste of skin skin skin and if you dont like the beetleborgs, why they hell are you looking at the thier stories? You can bite bite bite my **. |
| Jenashu 2004-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI hate hate hate Beetleborgs If I could could could I'd shoot shoot shoot The original actors actors actors And what the ** ** ** Is it doing doing doing Here at the Cartoons section section section Beetleborgs was a waste waste waste Of filming filming filming |
| JC 2003-06-25 ch 5, anon. | abuseHey Mariel, Don't diss Fangula. I'd "do the deed" with him if i got the chance! |
| J. Phoenix 2003-06-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseFINALLY! (Both for the update and Flabber and Vixey doing "the nasty") |
| Mariel1 2003-06-07 ch 5, | abuseWhoo-hoo! You updated, and they FINALLY got to do what they wanted to do! I must say, I can't really imagine Flabber doing "the deed", but then again, I guess most people can't imagine Count Fangula doing it, either. I don't know when I'll be able to update my story, though. I've actually written a real book, and I've been trying to get my transcript typed up so that I can publish it. I didn't forget, though. I just can't work on more than one thing at a time. Please be patient. And PLEASE update soon!! ^_^ |
| J. Phoenix 2003-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abusePLEASE UPDATE! Please! None of the good stories are being updated! WHY?!?!?!?! |
| Mariel1 2003-04-24 ch 4, | abuseWhoops, heehee...I haven't had much free time during the past week or so, so um, heehee, sorry...-_- Cool chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one...and darnit, they were so CLOSE! |
| Mariel1 2003-03-14 ch 3, | abusePlease, PLEASE update soon! Are Flabber and Vixey about to get *naughty*? ;-) |
| Mariel1 2003-02-23 ch 1, | abusePlease update.please, please, please? With cobwebs and a pickle on top? |
| Atreyu Nukus 2003-01-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseI loved your story! Can't wait till ya finish! |
| Mariel1 2003-01-23 ch 2, | abuseHey, it's Mariel. Sorry it's taken so long to review your story, but my father's peeved with me... Great start! I look forward to reading the rest of it. My only suggestion would be to use more paragraphs, simply to avoid eye fatigue, but I'm not complaining! Looks like I have a worthy rival...*rubs hands* MWAHAHAHAHAHAAA! ^_^ |