What a wonderful story this is, I have always loved leoglas fics... Wait actually "almost" any fic with Legolas in it lol just want to say the story was just simply marvelous ... had a great time reading it...

ps. somehow Aragon in chapter 9 made me thin of Gollum (shirk away from the tomatoes and rotten vegetables)

Ha! So you are considering becoming a king?
Arg!

haha thanks for an enjoyable afternoon

Wow! This story is great! Got to laugh at Pippin with third breakfasts!
I love your portrayal of Aragorn and the way you've described his guilt/pain/etc. So true and believable.

wow wow wow wow wow wow!! i read your story and was glued to the screen! You write wonderful! WoW! how can you do this? you´re on my favourites! Hey, would you, could you, read my story, or just review it? It wwould be a great honor to get a review from such a skilled author! I wish you all good and best wishes for your future stories!!

Menthol

Wow! I love this, I really do. Yes, that did clear it up a little...about the watcher and all that. Grr...I wish I could write like that. *sigh*

Ah, that reminds me- the one thing I am going to criticize you about. You keep making Aragorn or Legolas or whoever say "sigh." Sigh is not a complete sentance, yet you're treating it like it is. It would be better if you simply said "I sighed." Yeah...that was kinda getting to me.

Other than that- no criticism whatsoever! I can't wait for the next chapter!

three words
I LOVE IT!

*sigh, sniff, sob* That was so sweet! i loved how you put one of the hobbits in there at the end. and i liked the way Boromir was portrayed too. most fanfictions have him going around raping teenage girls or *shudder* LEGOLAS!! i don't know of any guys who actually read fanfiction. i don't think they get into it that much, but i know i do! whoo-hoo!

oops, i just realized i commented on the wet pants scene twice... just shows you how much i loved it, i guess! :D and that it's almost 5am, so i'm obviously insane. i love the ending, especially the sleepy hobbit bit. i can't wait for a sequel or prequel or something completely different from you. :)

'The dwarf raised an eyebrow, as the man managed an “it’s tea” with very tight lips.'...

hahahaha, i think i might just love you! :D :D of course, my mind went straight into the gutter when you first mentioned gimli raising an eyebrow at aragorn's crotch, but that's just because i'm... me. gimli and legolas' moment was so cute, too. i can't wait for more, honestly. :) (good thing i'm such an inconsistent reviewer, i've got a bit of catching up to do... hehe)

AH! why do i keep managing to miss updates to this story? thank god for my sister, who told me about the update ( a week late, but owell)
it was a fitting conclusion to a wonderful story. Like I've said all along, excellent characterizations and descriptions. Nice plot that was original enough to be entertaining but not to abstract.
It was a very good story.probably among the best of fanfiction.net. Did i mention you were on my favorite author's list? lol.well.
Excellent job. you should be proud of this story. And you should also write another one soon (hint hint)!
~eck~

Wow I am so sorry that I didn't get to review the other chapters. I don't remember what was confusing about it though. It was just wonderful. I loved it. Especially the ending! I am guessing that everything is going to be the same now? like as it was in the movie/book. lol. It was simply splendid. I admit I will miss this story also lol. Wonderful!

I'll say again, I loved this story. What a beautiful way to end it. I think you did a wonderful job. I'm looking forward to more from you.

lol. yes i'm ALL female. but this is the end? ah! i fell in love with this story! oh well! i guess i have to wait and see what other leggy stories you have to offer. oh yeah! i LOVED the "better warroir" thing!

This was a really great story Ola! I loved how you wrote it and how much emotion was in it. Very good job!

Beautiful story, and beautiful ending! I like it a lot, and I like the conclusion, having Aragorn and Legolas both stricken with guilt, arguing over it and renewing their friendship this way.
This was heartfreshing! Thank you!

Aislynn

It's over? NO! *shrieks and wails* HOW CAN IT BE OVER? *pulls a Galadriel and yells, breaks things and looks evil* *recovers* OOps. Let's not be destructive now. . . *sings a nice little lament for "Shortcut"*

*tiny sad little voice* But how can it be over? I love this thing! At least you will be writing other things, that is good.

And what do you mean "tea"? You mean. . .it wasn't tea? *looks at Aragorn wide-eyed and gets a funny mental picture. . .

Aragorn: HE'S BACK HE IS ALIVE THANK YOU ERU AI ELBERETH GILTHONIEL I AM SO HAPPY LEGOLAS HAS COME BACK TO US OH I AM GOING TO HUG HIM SO HARD HE CAN'T BREATHE OR SEE THIS IS THE BEST DAY OF MY LIFE YAY YAY THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK-oh no! OOps. . .* *smiles innocently and hi-fives Gimli* We KNEW it! *Dances with Gimli singing in a sing song voice "We knew it wasn't tea. . .we knew it wasn't tea. . ."*

And no drinking? That is okay. . .*looks at floor and puts hands behind back* *is suddenly fascinated by floor* *traces circles on floor with foot* you did a really goods job on Aragorn and Legolas talking and all that I forgive you. *looks up and smiles*

Good. You are all right. *sighs in a relieved manner* Simply cannot have you dying on us, you see. . .we need you. . .and you write really well. . .

*raises hand and waves it wildly* I WILL COME BACK TO VISIT! Don't you worry none about that. . . *smiles*

!*~crazygirly007~*!

P.S. Legsy can keep my blanket too. *smiles and hugs Leggy*