What I love about this isn't just that it involves Tsubaki, who never really gets enough attention, I think, but the motion in this fic...

Lovely job! It's not very often you find stories written about Tsubaki-hime - she didn't seem very popular with many of the fans. I commend you for getting inside her head and making her easier to sympathize with. Well done! ^^

Absoulutely amazing. I've always liked Tsubaki-hime, and it's great to find such a wonderful fic about her. This might not make sense, but the writing style felt like the ocean. A "sway and a roll", just as you described it.

Lovely. You have a masterful way with words. You captured more than the ordinary cliche damsel in distress, but gave Tsubaki a grace and depth that does her diginity.

I read this on some ML somewhere (joined too many, can't remember now O.X;;;) and I had to find it again. I love the style you write in, it's very rhymethic and powerful ^^ And no one ever writes about the minor characters of YamiMatsu (besides Hijiri -_-;;) I've been dying to find a good Tsubaki-hime fic for ages. I'm so glad I finally found one ^^

I agree, that was a *very* powerful fic. Well done, and achieved a lot in such a small space - the progression was very natural, smooth. I mean, I've never looked at Tsubaki-hime like that before, and this opened my eyes. I loved the voice you gave her, and the feel of the story - terribly impressive. :D I hope to see more fics from you!

Very powerful, and beautifully written. More?

Very nice. I liked the stylistic way you've written this - very flowing and rhythmic.

Finally, a fic focused on Tsubaki-hime! And you write very well, too! ^_^

wow! i read this already on the mu/tsu mailing list (but i'm always too scared to say anything and fill up everyones mail boxes >_!!!!