I think it's funny that Marty thinks that everyone is going to kill him. This is really funny even though nobody is in character, but it still feels like it makes sense in some twisted (ha ha) way. Very funny, good job! :)

I see this hasn't been updated for a while. It is really funny. UPDATE PLEASE!

Oh, yeah, I am SO favoriting this! ;D

Hi, it's Phish again. Listen, you haven't updated this story in, what, 4 years? Update! The real Marty would go balistic if he reads this. That would be funny to watch! I imagine him going outside, starting to scream his head off, running around in circles, screaming, rolling around, climbing the fence, more screaming, and starting to act like Homer Simpson. Whilst still screaming. Then acting like an animal. *giggles, looks out window, sees Marty having a cow* Hi, Marty!
Marty:*mouth foaming**chasing imaginary things around the yard*YA!
anyway, that's how I percieve Crazy Marty.
Marty: HI, ANAKIN McFLY!*tackleglomps me*
Me: ok, down, boy!
with all due respect,
Phish Tacko

Wow, you made Marty STUPID! =D. Stupid Marty reminds me of my cat! Yay! Now I've got something to marvel at, 'cause it was so funny! =D. I like Stupid Marty. The part where Marty throws up all over the kids is funny! Oh, please, write more!
with all due respect,
Phish Tacko

it was good. You made Marty sound childish and a tiny bit gay. A lot of it was funny though. Did u write him acting childish b/c he got hit on the head? Will he get better? Will he figure out why the movie is familiar? BTTF is not rated R. well thanks for writing. write more very very soon. thanks. bye. :-)

Aw, that was the last chapter. :( I think you need to update. Lol.

K, my fav lines: "The guy there looked like me too, but I don’t remember ever being that smart."

And, "All I know is that they were going to get into big trouble when they went home, because the DeLorean was covered with frozen tissue paper. It looks kinda cool, actually."

Hah! :D

K, I'm going to read more of your stories now. I saw you had a LOTR one... *is VERY interested* Lol. Ok. I'm done now. (For the moment, anyways).

~Red Bess Rackham

The police officer: Nice name. *snort*

The repitition about Dave dying something on Marty green really hit my funny bone. Hah, it was so good.

How can you tell I'm totally sucked into this mental and random story!? Lol. I only reviewed every flipping chapter... lol. I just realized - if you are getting review alerts to your e-mail inbox, your going to have a SCHWACK of them from me, LOL.

Ah well. Reviews are bliss. :D I'm completely addicted to reviews. :D!!

Anyways. Onto the next chapter.

~Red Bess Rackham

~Red Bess Rackham

Hey hey. Me again. Back from work. :D

Ok, the best was when he says, "Nobody calls me chicken... Speaking of chicken! Daddy sued McDonald's..." AHAH! Loved it.

~Red Bess Rackham

This - honestly - is like the funniest story I've read in a long time, LOL. I will SO be telling my cousin about this... Anyways, I really have to go to work now, so I'll have to finish this when I get home. :D

~Red Bess Rackham

Oh, my goodness. The bit about Santa was classic. But my fav line was totally: "If a book is on the school reading list, it means you have to read it or teacher will kill you." LOL!

Ok, one more chapter and then I HAVE to go to work or I'm going to be late. :P

~Red Bess Rackham

This is so hilarious! Oh my goodness! Insanely out of character, of course, but reall, really funny. Excellent job!

~Red Bess Rackham

LOL!

This is killing me. It really is. :D And I dunno about flutes being used for swordfights, but tenor recorders should NEVER be used for lightsaber fights. I speak from experience. *glances guiltily at dent in her recorder* It's not even mine!

*rolls eyes* Marvellous scene-setting, that was. :D