YAY!

The shower bit... *cracks up* I don't think they have the sort of showers we do in the modern era, but I don't really care. Only glows green on thursdays. Great. XD The whole hair cutting escapade, great. Although Gateau giving bone-crushing hugs to Marron sounds disturbingly like Onion. Poor Carrot's broken fingernails (must keep 'em properly trimmed.) I have no idea how to react to this version of Marron. Probably because you start us off with such silliness, I'm not even slightly bothered by thoughts of characterization. Slick work, there. The letter sounds so much like Carrot, though. Ah, the irony of us knowing sommat the charas don't. Funfun. Swapping hearts. Cute. Yes, he is gorgeous. And as for the ending, awwwww. XD

Yay! There really isn't enough good CxM fluff. Keep it up.

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Yay, incest. Great writing. Took a visit to your fanfic site. Really liked what I read, especially that disturbing dream one.

The radioactive robe bit was amusing. XD And it's okay-I don't mind being "blamed" for this fic. It was sweet...shows I'm not the only one who can SEE a sensitive, angsty Carrot easily. ^_^