aw! ::is in tears now::.. angst! GOTTA LOVE THE ANGST! keep it up! ;_;v

Not bad really. My favorite part was where Carrot described what Marron meant for him after his death. The line where he said his brother was beautiful actually touchec my soul. I know many writers would use this as a chance to do a yoai, but there are different types of love that doesn't reley on physical intamacy. Good job showing the love the two brothers shared together.