Interesting story. Is there more to it??

only problem i have is that chlorophyll is the green stuff in plants. the thing you're looking for is chloroform. otherwise, good story!

I like a lot update plz:)!

WOW! I really love this story please keep going with it and update asap:)!!

Your not planning to leave it like that are you? please write some more. by the way thanks for writing some ow m7. there isn't enough.

I really liked you story and the idea behind it. If you don't mind I'd like to suggest that you add a bit more of Emma's POV, chop up that one really long paragraph explaining their past, and explain more about whay Emma was pushing Vin away. It's just some little tips, but you're idea is great.