Wow, these stories are interesting. I think it would have been better if you made them separate stories, but I still like it this way.

The Trouble With Mary was funny and I loved it. I don't like Mary Sues either. It was so amusing and how Mary Sue was Alenai just made me laugh so hard.

I Saw Three Ships was funnier and much more unpredictable then the first. Hermione/Snape? I loved it so much.

"Thirty points from Gryffindor, and all because you have a crush on Snape!"

So Sue Me's first chapter was hilarious.

"It seems," said Dumbledore, his clear eyes twinkling merrily, "That our Sorting Hat has met a dilemma. Princess Legolawen possesses so many admirable qualities that it has been unable to make a final decision regarding House placement.

I just love this story. It is going on my favorite. I encourage you to write more fanfictions.

I must say, this is one of the most brilliant parodies I've ever read. You're getting it all in there.

*is unable to breathe, she is laughing so hard* You are too wonderful. No, you aren't. It's all Mary Sue's doing! She is the Alenai, the great one!

Oh, good grief! SHe plays all positions! Of course!

This may be the funniest thing I've read in weeks.

Good as this story is it's a bit long so sorry... But I may come back to it eventually.

Later Days!

Krys

hahaha. that was kind of funny... but why are they in third year, just wondering?

Ha ha ha! Cute. Written like JK herself. But I don't get it... Is he technically still in the chamber, learning about the cliches, or is this really happening, and the chamber just happened to be there?

You know, I agree. She WAS very interesting to read about.

And I also agree. She WAS inherently evil. . You sure put a good spin on it.

geez! and i thought my luv life wuz complicated...not!

but thatz ok, this is still pretty good.

hugs

**(erin)**

this is pretty good, except for one thing.

i get the feeling you dont like Orlando Bloom very much.

Arlando Plume-Orlando bloom

see! i'm not as stupid as you think! now, onto story 2, or wutever.

nice writing!

hugs

**(erin)**

Man, I hope this is meant to be sickeningly stereotypical...because she makes all of my (35) Mary-Sue's pale in comparison (but you can bet they look good doing it ;) )

Anyway, you commented on my story (Through the Eyes of an Innocent Bystander), and I just thought I would tell you that I am very annoyed that someone has already discovered where I am going with it (the whole Draco thing you mentioned) It is part of a plot twist I have planned. I am sure you can guess. Giggle. Kudos on the intuitiveness, though.

Sometimes I'm surprised that I keep coming back to this fic, but then I get a nice laugh out of it, and I remember why - this is just such a fun, tongue-in-cheek story. Nice going, as usual.

Ha ha! This is great! keep up the good work!

This is hilarious, it's frightening how many stories are like this though!