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Kurt Baros aka The Falcon
2009-11-08 . chapter 10
man that was good and i think bulma will be better for ranma then akane atleast bulma wont posion him with her food like akane food with will probely try to eat him on top of that lol
flood125
2009-09-19 . chapter 10
good story
Count Papaya
2009-07-11 . chapter 10
Fairly awesome story you have here! It's pretty interesting and is well balanced out, can't wait to read more!
ShineX
2009-07-07 . chapter 6
Little over the top on the insults, but good nontheless
ShineX
2009-07-07 . chapter 5
Nice Chapter, lol
ShineX
2009-07-07 . chapter 2
I can actually see him doing that if he wanted to get back badly enough, but even Ranma is smart enought to remember that she could just track him if he took off right then.
ShineX
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
Well this is cool, I've been trying to find a crossover like this.
Innortal
2009-06-16 . chapter 10
Well done and thought out. Looking forward to how you move it along.
divad relffehs
2009-06-05 . chapter 5
I think it would be best if ranma either just by virtue of his awesome martial genious manages to match saijin advancement or by virtue of the dragon balls changes humans so that he can match the saijins without ceasing to be human. then when your done with the saga of ranma in the dragon ball world it would be cool if he near the end of his life wishes on the dragon balls to go back to his home world shortly after he originally left made young again and starts mixing it up with the people from his world.
Raffiki
2009-06-01 . chapter 8
KAMEHAMEHA

Ha bet Genma loved that one. :P
mynameisthedoctor
2009-06-01 . chapter 4
Ha. I've never read Ranma but I have Inuyasha which is by the same auther and I'm the biggest Dragon Ball geek I know. (and I've been on the internet.) That thing with Puar and Ranma at the same time as Yamcha and Bulma was SO due to happen sometime. Good call.
Tellemicus Sundance
2009-05-16 . chapter 10
BWAHAHAHAHA!! This is a GREAT story! I'm so happy that only did I stumble across it, but that you seem to finally be updating it again!

I'm very interested in seeing what becomes of Ranma, Ryoga, Goku, Bulma, and Ukyo in the near-future. I wonder how the DB world will be shaped now that Goku has an 'aniki' and Ryoga to help him out with the whole Red Ribbon Army and King Piccolo crisises. At the very least, this tournament is certainly going to be an epic one and I honestly am not sure if Roshi would be able to make it to the Finals like he did in canon to stop Goku from winning.

And although you've done a beautiful job of portraying Ranma and Bulma's 'relationship', I can't help but hope that we'll be seeing Shampoo again. She may be slightly a ditz, but she is a formidable warrioress in her own right and quite smart. Besides, I just can't see her allowing Ranma to escape through a dimensional portal without trying to go after him (and Ranma made it no secret that he never intended to return). In case you haven't guessed, Shampoo is one of my more favorite characters. I only hope that the old crone would've been unable to follow Shampoo because of her responsibilities to the village. In my opinion, Shampoo is a much more enjoyable character when she's not letting that ghoul of a ancestor control her life. And a catfight between Bulma and Shampoo over Ranma (with or without him knowing it) would most certainly be a sight worth seeing!

Yes, I very much enjoyed this story. And I hope that you can post again soon. Soon as in within a month's time, not a few years. But, if it comes to that, I'll wait because I really do like this story. It's most definitely one of the best (if not THE best) Ranma/DB crossover I've ever read. 11/10!

Until next time...
Rey6
2009-05-16 . chapter 10
I'm glad to see that you're continuing this. This is definitely one of my favorite Ranma/DB crossovers and I have high hopes for this one.
Requiem the Relentless
2009-05-11 . chapter 10
While your formatting and actual writing could use some work, I do applaud your jokes, plot points, and general story.

This will, unfortunately, taint Ranma's fighting style. In Dragonball (and even moreso in Z) training is mostly physical conditioning. In Ranma 1/2, while the conditioning is important, technique is prized higher.

Also, Goku wishing for Ranma to be his actual brother, hilarious joke, one I hope will eventually be actually wished for (hey, it's an in-story way for Ranma to become a Saya-jin, and I support it)
Eromancer
2009-05-11 . chapter 10
pretty good, I'm rather unamused with how you portrayed the Amazons but I guess it can't be helped.

I noticed something, much later in the series Goku stops using the staff no matter how useful it is, but its not like Ranma couldn't get it as some kind of present. Plus its cannon that Ranma knows how to use a staff and VERY well at that.
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