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| Valentine Satiguss 2008-08-28 ch 1, | abuseThat is, perhaps, the best morning after I've ever read. Bravo. |
| Mysticalflame 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseJust as entertaining as the first, though I'd have to say that 'The Golden Rule' has a special place in my heart. :P |
| ShuShu124 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome! When I read the zomie part at the beginning I was like, "What the hell am I reading!" I literaly said it outloud...Lucky I'm home alone... Great story though! Izzy Shisuke -^_^- |
| CessoRestito 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuse>D< what a great sequel! |
| Concubine99 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuse^^, LOL |
| The life of a teenage racoo... 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseheh, good i liked the format for the first on though, you know the whole there are certain lines you cant cross thing. [still adding it to my favorites though] |
| DarkAngelKisses 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abuseHey again. 'Naruto was certifiably one of the Living Dead.' Interesting; I am watching Dawn of The Dead right now. Not to mention, I can totally see him as a zombie. (Hungry for Ramen, of course). *Snickers* Crashing into a table, eh? Smooth move. What makes me stifle laughter: Naruto lunging at the table and catching said table 'off guard'. Deeply Wrong. If that were spoken aloud instead of written, you would be able to hear the capital letters. Yeah...I was wondering if he was in Sasuke's house instead of his own, because...non-stockage of food is just *wrong* for Naruto. Grinage time: "Ok, Mr. Smug Bastard. What time did /you/ wake up, huh?" Oh, always with the arguments...I love how they are still snapping and snipping at each other while affectionate at the same time (and IC too). Example: Sasuke hugging Naruto, then *ever so slightly* provoking him again. Perfection in an instant: Sasuke's line "Anything...but ramen" and kissing Naruto at the same time, only for Naruto to substitute a punch with a kiss. |
| The Funky Bubbly Gurlz 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseFound the sequel - where's the trilogy?? ~Shizzy |
| Ashen Phoenix 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuseYour writing is really very funny, and the characters' personalities never strayed to OOC. The ending was a bit confusing, but overall it was great. ^_^ Goin' to the sequel right now. |
| Birdy 2006-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read The Golden Rule AND this...if you couldn't guess... IT ROX!I have added both of them to my favorites. It's SO cute! Ir I told you my favorite part, I'd up recaping both this and The Golden Rule completely! I LOVE SasuNaru, though, so that may explain why it rocked so much. E-mail me back and keep up the GREAT work! ~*~Birdy |
| yue no rei 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abusehehe interesting sequel. im not sure whether its day or night tho... ~_~ |
| Khyie 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI love you. |
| losthimagain 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abuseXD I love it! Thank you! |
| Jessica 2006-04-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnother great lead-in!...You definitely felt Naruto's trepidation when it was finally revealed that he was in Sasuke's apartment instead of his! Another very cute in 'The Golden Rule' arc! They are so cute together! ;p |
| rabidbutterfly 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseahaha... i notice a distinct lack of showering so i don know what the summarry is talking about but is was a good summary and a good story!! |