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Ersatz
2006-07-04 . chapter 1
A fitting tribute - I loved those little guys.

Good one!
Callisto Callispi
2004-11-19 . chapter 1
I love it when people mesh poetry and machinery together -- it's just like this ultimate literary paradox. Science against art. ^_^ I liked the poem. It made me think about the Dark Tower series from a new angle. Excellent job. ^_^

-C. Callispi
Marcy Bayd
2004-06-08 . chapter 1
cool. i always did feel bad thinking that those poor lil machienes would be stuck forever... lost.

Marcy
Gryffindorscholar
2003-12-08 . chapter 1
Cool! This is a really good poem. I felt sorry for those guys, I'm glad I wasn't the only one.
DesertDragon
2003-08-22 . chapter 1
I am very fond of Wastelands, especially the beginning (with it's references to Watership Down and such), and i felt the same way about the little driods. This was well done.
Red Masque
2003-06-06 . chapter 1
Nice. Very nice. I dunno if this was meant or if it's just my all too philosophical (don't laugh) nature, but for some reason this poem really seems to reflect their futility and lack of purpose... don't ask me how; i guess it's the combinations of words. to be honest, i've only read the books once each, and i'm gonna have to read them over again several times more to remind myself of the more in-depth lore in Desperation (my fave of the two).
Nails For Your Crucifix
2003-01-26 . chapter 1
I always felt sorry for the droids too. This was a fitting tribute. LOL good job.
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