And with this, I believe I have favorited all of your Slayers stories. This is so nice. Among other wonderful things, one of the best descriptions of a first kiss that I've ever seen.
It would be lovely if you got back into writing Slayers fics someday.

*tears up* WAI! beautiful, i LOVED it, it was so sweet and powerful and m...! X3 *hugs you for writing it*

OMF I loved it!! Zel/Lina KAWAII XD Very nicely done! Keep up the great work

AW! That was sweet!

Sweet, superb, Heartwarming! ^_^ I adore this piece of prose!!

*claps*
OH this is simple wonderful and sweet...in Lina Inverse's way...ya know w/out giving out too much mushiness and not leaving the reader with a hated cliffhanger. Oh I just wish you can type out more terrific fics like this one...with a little more romance into it....Please? Now I can daydream about the perfect couple of Slayers...Thanx!
Miss "L" ~_^

I LOVED IT!!!!

Well, first off let me say that I'm a Z/A fan

Second, let me say that this is one of the most tender,sweet fics I have every read. Well writen, it had tears in my eyes.

Although I support Z/A I'm not opposed to L/Z stories and I read them occasionaly. But i don;t think one had ever made me cry before.

Excellent work

That was pretty good. Keep it up. ^^

I've seen some good stories concerning this pair in my vast search of the internet, and I must say that this story is VERY good! ^_^ I've only RARELY come across something this profound and just plain GOOD! If you feel up to it, write another!! I'd be first in line to read it!

that was excelent! Finally! Some L/Z action! W00T!! And I think Disease is a great song for L/Z, make a song fic please!!!

Wow. Just...wow. Really excellent story. I'm a big fan of Zel/Lina myself. It's hard to find the coupling let alone such a great story. Too much Gourry/Lina or Xellos/Lina now. I ended up crying during the whole "killing Lina" part. It was really angst/emotional but still wonderfully written.

This story is BLOODY ($&#@$(#% MARVELOUS!!!

Wonderful! Poignant and sweet and darkly romantic. BRAVO!!!!

--Cheers,
--Chibi-Kaz

wow, i throroughly enjoyed that. =)
you have a wonderful, vivid style of writing,
and you portrayed lina's character very in-
character. not to mention a unique plot as well.
the only thing i'm still curious about is
what or why Zel was having those nightmares.
was it a result of his chimeric form?? =))
just wondering--!!

well, i hope to see more fanfics from you
soon!! =) i'll be looking out for them.

yours,
sakuraaaa