WOW! Excellent chapter! Such a good story. I like the rivalry between Eol and Fainor. Every thing is so well done. Please do update soon.

This is quite intriguing! I'm looking forward to reading more!

interesting. . .very interesting! I want to read more PLEASE!

This is an interesting story but I would like to know if you intend on waiting another year before you next update.

Wow, the originality of this just hits you with every new chapter. This is truly a great fic, and I hope that you can update again soon.

I am absolutely enthralled by this, and wait eagerly for an update!

You have a great talent for telling tales, and your stories have the grandoise aspects of legend or myth. I love this story, and wait eagerly to read of what happens to Elrohir. This is all so fascinating.

*chokes for a second* You are really good when it comes to getting the inside scoop on the internal going-ons of a person. Also, the detail that you write in makes one able to see things through the words. You don't write, you paint. I love this story, because it has a really unusual twist to it. I like the adding of another ring in it.
I cannot wait until you decide to put up another chapter. I love the story.
Namarie!
~Nimeneth~

I'm overwhelmed by this. You do an excellent job of making the reader share the heartbreak and desperation Elrohir feels. It seems that he's about to make a terrible mistake, and yet I can understand how he feels he must. Perhaps he's meant to.

I look forward to more.

-Ell

It is so heartbreaking to read about Elrohir's despair and grief. Please don't leave the story unfinished. Please update.

Feel free to delete this once it has been read.

WHERE IS THE UPDATE? Here is your one Elrohir fic.. and then you just leave it to grow whispy tendrils of green mold spores? Ew. please clean out your refrigerator and dust off the next chapter!

Beautifully written, as your stories before. The crafting of the words creates and sustains a dripping, lamenting melancholy that does not waver throughout the piece. The mood wraps its cold fingers around your heart and gently, subtly squeezes, holding the pressure so expertly that by the end of the chap, when you are able to breath reality again there is a lifting and you realize the torment you have been enduring. Realize that your breath has been coming quick and shallow for the last few minutes.

As with your other stories, your characterizations are quite brilliant, original and complex. The dialog, interplay, culture, texture is so seamlessly tolkien (though arguably better and more realistic due to the developed psychology) that I think you should just name your works as appendices.

Your work with the ring and time concepts is very interesting and works itself very nicely into the world.

Oh, and did I mention that I love Elrohir?

The one thing that stuck out as a subtle suggestion was the way that timetravel concepts and ring were discussed. Such background info is very important, indeed, but these passages gave a slight catch to my eye (ie: I had to come out of the experience of the scene to fully to recieve this info) How to fix that - I am not sure. One thing I have noticed is that less information is sometimes more effective. Or that with inference and a trust in the readers' intelligence (I know) you are able to accomplish the same thing with less. But this is merely a minor detail.. and only a personal opinion of course.

I look forward to reading more.

Wow, Jay was very right. This is a great fic.

I love the twist and turns. I allways enjoy a well done Au story :)

I hope your planning on writing some more cause this ones going in my favorites ;0

Keep up the good work!

-Insane Muse

Wow! What a tremendous idea. I love the idea of Elrohir trying to change time itself, to change what happened. Bur poor Elladan, and poor Elrohir, how he must feel seeing his brother dead. You wrote his pain so vividly!

This is wonderful, a very angsty fic (my favourite type) with such raw emotions, and so very, very sad. Please continue soon.

Jay

An original idea, and Lumya the Ring of Time is a fascinating concept. At first, that is. Later it becomes an instrument of unmitigated horror. The whole bloody history of Middle-earth repeating itself is almost to much to contemplate. In addition, you manage to show and not tell us that this Ring, too, is addictive.
But I think I'll stop pursuing that line of thought now...