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Lifestyle
2008-05-20
ch 15,
abuseOo!! Oo! Oo!

I'm in love with this story. The flow of your writing is just AMAZING> like it was taken directly from a novel- a good one.

I'm not to the end yet... I'm not sure if you have finished this story, or if its still in the process of being completed, but I hope it will be someday if it's not already!

Nicely done, love :)
california-cheese
2008-03-08
ch 18,
abuseEEK! THE FLUFF! *squeals* hee hee...i love this story! even though i usually hate fluff...confusion...

YOU ARE LIKE THE BESTEST WRITTER EVA! WHOOT!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ill give you muffins if you do! you know you want a muffin, so dont resist any longer and UPDATE! pwetty pwease?
jazzy
2008-01-26
ch 18, anon.
abuseaww... such cute ickle kidsies! anyway, u haven't updated 4 almost 3 years, but luckily this wuz a GREAT place to leave off! I hate it when people orphan fics at bad places! For me, beautiful fics r so wonderful, so ESSENTIAL, that i can't understand how anyone could let anything that sweet and good go... but people do it all the time... with fics and with other things... pleeze update!?! =D
jazzy
2008-01-26
ch 16, anon.
abuseFINALLY-i thought the romance was coming way back in chapter when-ever-it-was, but now it seems we actually might have something... i can understand aoshi... dependence can be dangerous... ur fic is deep (philosophically) yet not overpowering... aa, now i'm hungry... i want a muffin. or a bagel, or an onion bagel... but i don't have either... :D
jazzy
2008-01-26
ch 12, anon.
abuseI like how it's funny, but w/ serious undertones... maybe a leetle bit corny that misao all of a sudden has to HOST a party (eek!), but still a nice scenario... it'd be cool 2 bring in more of misao's kunai/ninja etc. skills, but the story can do w/o them... I see LOVE 4 my favorite manga charachter (*sigh*- aoshi!!) and misao! :D
jazzy
2008-01-26
ch 7, anon.
abuseso sad and sweet! It scares me, because i know that someday i'll need someone like that, love them, and maybe they won't love me, and i won't be so independent... A very nice chappie, and an absolutely luvly fic! :D
R.Kay
2007-08-21
ch 18,
abuseI know it's been 2 years but I really hope you update~ really cute story ^_^
Ipanema
2007-04-22
ch 18,
abuseI know its 2 years later, but I just finished reading your story and I honestly think you dont need another ending or more chapters as you say on your note, anything else wold just be too cliche or predictable. Its great as it is.
Airemir
2007-01-27
ch 18,
abuseDon't worry about not finishing this. Just make another chapter and you can call it quits. You're the author, this story is yours to tell, so you can just finish it how you like.


This is just...beautiful. This should be classic story of A/M pairings. Do you know how hard it is to find a story of Aoshi characterized as he should be? You painted a picture perfect portairt of both and all characters without sacrificing grammar, spelling and story flow. And your plot is so original, and not confusing. Wow. One of the best, le mieux mon ami.

But can you make it so that its a bit open-ended ending so that I can make a sequel? With your permission of course.
Indecisive Mind
2006-10-17
ch 17,
abuseWow...have I told you this fic is awesome? I think so...just wanted to repeat it, because really, this IS good, and I don't know how to accurately describe it. Beautiful, well-written, and romantic without being corny. Where DID you run off to, anyway? :P
Pendari
2006-10-12
ch 18,
abuseOh lord, I just read Gravity in its entirety in one sitting, and GOD, is it beautiful. The plot, the characters, the raw emotion, all done to the highest degree. You characterized Aoshi and Misao so damn perfectly. AU? What AU? Che. This could be canon for all I care. Your Aoshi is so utterly AOSHI, and your Misao is so... well, Misao. Guh. I so love this, so very very much.

Honestly. I would quote the sections that I enjoyed, but I'm afraid I'd quote the whole story back at you, so I won't. But honestly. This is so damn gorgeous, it's not even funny. Thank you so, so much for writing this. Just. GUH. Thank you.

-ignores the fact that review is around a year and a half too late-
mandella-sama
2006-06-19
ch 18, anon.
abuseUPDATE PLEASE! I reread this story and I thought it was complete but now that I know that it is not I would really really like it to be completed. So please please update becaue i really love it and want to read the end.
-Mandella-sama
Indecisive Mind
2006-03-13
ch 18,
abuseI reread this story again and...wow. It's even better the second time! Please update soon! I bet at least 50 people are waiting for an update. And AOSHI AND MISAO FRIGGIN' KISSED! All right!
MindIIBody
2005-11-27
ch 18,
abuseAww...finish it already!! *Pouts* it's a good story, hee hee hee...^_^
Patto-chan
2005-11-25
ch 17,
abusePlease continue this fanfic and I won't bother you again!
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