| Reviews for BROKEN |
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takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 19This is asweet ending to a good story,it had its ups an downs an was great in every way. Thank You. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 18Yeah,she was broken,but with Mark's help she's healing. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 17Okay,I was wrong it's not Texas,its th' beach,but that's okay, is such a free spirit,an that will be good for having to calculate every move,before he makes it. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 16He's taking her home to texas,I bet,to his ranch. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 15I wondered how close Mark would come to killing Davie,before he stopped himself,farther than I thought,an yet not as far as i felt he would. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 14Fitting punishment,an one that did not occur to me,this is going to be very more needs to be said. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 13I don't think anything is gonna happen to him,but isn't that sweet of him to already have protection for her in case something when he gets back there is gonna be some love-making going on like nobodies business. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 12Beautiful song,and it fits,the whole mood.I knew that Tony was a mobster of some sort,This is gonna be interesting to say the least. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 11I had a feeling he knew someone like Tony,I assumed biker,but this man is just as good if not better.I totally understand why she stepped in front of that bullet for him,she cares about him. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 10Being a biker,he probably has acquaintances in that world,he can call on for help if needs be,I'm guessing,so just better be careful who he messes one on one Mark can handle that no problem,thing is,they like the Nexus don't fight we in for a hairy I 'm not talkin' 'bout Jessie's hair. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 9Happy child discovering real love an not knowing squat about is gonna be interesting. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 8She did exactly the right thing,helping him even tho' he growled at her,That's what friends each other. An Mr. Davie can just go suck air! I figured he had contacts in other cities,to try an track her down. I'm just surprised that nobody has figured this big guy and the Undertaker are one an the same,yet. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 7An everybody has him pegged as this big ol' uncaring,unfeeling monster,like he's some supernatural being,b/c of his wrestling persona,mudpuppies! He's a humanbeing,just like anybody else,for goodness sakes!A lot of folks tend to see him as a one dimensional character,but to me,in my humble opinion,he's multi-faceted. But she got to stop divesting herself of her clothes,he's strong,but he's not made of stone. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 6Even with the violence,in some ways this is a sweet chapter,she wants him to leave to protect him from the bad guys that are chasing her,an he wants to protect her from those very same bad guys,its kinda sweet. |
takerfan925 11/24/10 . chapter 5I love it,I see ya got over your shyness an he's in his boxers,that is adorable. |