This is a good story. Keep writing!

i Just wanted to tell you, you are doing a good job but i hope you start to make some new chapters soon so i can read on.

good idea, i admit... but it needs to have a bit of a better format, to make it not so hard to follow. sorry if i offended, i'm just being honest...

i read your story and i am a big freddy fan and i hope to see what is instored for the dream warriors so hurry with the next chapter please.

that damn bastard Freddy-always stickin' his nose in where it doesn't belong! well, to hell with him, i say!

hehehehehehehe...

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don't worry, it wasn't a threat-just a bit of a warning...

anyways, Jason is so very cool!

me likey (this story)... me likey a lot...

hehehehehehehehe...

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poor Ryoko and Tenchi-my favorites!

continue...or else i'll send Jason and Kigata after you...

"Come here, you two..."

hehehehehehehehe...

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Nice to see you updated again, and I still think its a really good fiction .

You made a few minor mistakes at the beginning of the chapter and the divide between the two sections could do with a clearer outline, like a dash or something.

Please update again soon :)

Nice to see you finally updated :) Again there are a few spelling mistakes in here that you could sort out, and again you have gone back to spelling the name Kruger not Krueger, which is a shame.

I like the developments though, and I think you shoudl finish the story soon, I want to know what happens.

Just read from the begining to the last update, Think that this is really interesting... We need to see the spirit Detectave that is in the World. I like how you have crossed the Worlds so Well. Can't wait to see what there Strenghts in the Dream World will be.

Its still good! I must admit I do get a little confused with the high amount of charaters, but thats really casue I'm a simpleton!

I really like the plot development and I adore the speed you are writing this :) Its keeping me so happy. Just wish I could get on with mine! (Having an ispiration problem, ill be more than happy to hear any sugestions!)

I want to know who the child is at then end of the chapter. Please update again soon, its so hard to find people with the same Nightmare interests, there are so few of us left

Good luck with the rest of the Fic

Carrier

Im back again! Im so happy you decided to update so soon :D Not so many people are this enthusiastic... well I am, but there you go.

I have also added this story to my favourites too :)

Again you could spell check though, especially at the beginning of the chapter.

Carrier

this is a really weird story but not bad...i dont like it though how you put dr emmit browm in...the doc belongs in bttf only

It gets better and better :) Thanks for changing the name spelling :)

I honestly cant wait for the rest, I really really want to know where this is leading, esspecially with the introduction of the new Doctor. Anyone who looks at reviews first, please read and review this fic?

Some goos descriptions in here as well. Though you still have a problem with spacing... but if you choose the way you lay things out.

Carrier, thanks for updating so quick :)

Hi, I read your story and Ill be really honest, it was one of the best things I have ever read on fanfiction (Well in a VERY long time at least, one of my other favourites being an Evil dead/ Digimon thing)

Anyway back to your story. I have a few sugestions for some improvements

1. A real big problem is the spacing, it gets a little difficult to understand a few things when there are a lot of people speacking, maybe you could put a new line each time someone speaks?

2. Its spelt Krueger...

3. Only in the later chapters I noticed a few minor spelling mistakes, you could re read through and try to find them so you can change them?

Anyways, good luck with updates and when you do more, ill re review for you. And please be swift about it? :)

Carrier