Great story ^_^

That was so beautiful, depressing, and sad...*sighs deeply* I *heart* angst. The ending was perfect. Great job! ^^ I love it.

~*StarWolf*~

I love tragedy and I love angst, I love it when not everyone gets to go home in the end. I think you did a marvelous job on this fic. I really, really liked it. I loved the similes you used to describe the colour of Frodo's fathomless eyes. I think the story was told very well. You really did a fantastic job. Haha the necrophilia was a nice touch as well, it made it darker. I really don't know what else to say, this was just a very good story, I really liked it.

WOW. I never guessed. Making love to one you think dead? Beautifully written, but a bit disturbing.

Revulen,

it's not about being lazy or not trying hard enough. It's about making a choice on how to tell a story and to run with it. The key point of this fic is not Sam expressing his feelings. It's the feelings themselves. Sad thst you left no email address.

"I realise that –even though it’s Sam’s Point of View- in many parts the language quite differs from the one Sam uses when he’s actually talking. When writing, however, I was trying to look directly into his heart and put his feelings to words; "translate" them, in a way, because I feel that while he’s totally aware of his deep love for Frodo, he’s not (always) able to elaborate on it."

That's valid in theory. But the reason we read fics written from Sam's point of view is because we want to experience events from SAM'S POINT OF VIEW. Which means having them narrated to us in his own distinct voice. Readers want to hear about Sam, not some overly articulate stranger - this could have been beautiful if only you'd tried a little harder.

Okay... he died?? WHAT??

I liked it at first.

It's nice and deep.

I liked your insights into Sam's thoughts.

But whatsup with Frodo dying? why?

What??

A bit confusing..

The story wins my kudos none the less.

Wow! that was beautiful.. The way you, with wonderful colorful words, compared Frodo to the shire, and discribed his eyes. BEAUTIFUL!! *eyes tear up* Even though I know that he's not dead it doesn't comfort me the least, ..because Sam there by Frodos side, mentally telling Frodo he loves him and giving him all his love. Antigone, this is art! Pure art! You have done a great job!!!
*glomps*

wow! Some1 other than me actually kiled Frodo! Yay!

This was really good, have u written other stories like this? You should...you are a good author, plz write more!

AAAAH! I can't believe that SAM hs the ring...

oooo..continue? Woo-hoo! :)

wow. all i can say is that was beautiful. and you haven't any reviews? what a shame!

i usually don't venture into the R rated section, but something told me your story would be different. it was extremely well-written and (believe it or not) i cried in the end.

i hope you write more for LotR. that was spectacular work. absolutely smashing.