like. Nice Story, very well written.
That may seem cheesy, but I have nothing more to say. So yeah. Very nice.

Hey when are you gonna review this awesome story?The suspense is killing me

I love your story and I wish that you would write some more. I'm a big fan of Dauragon but I wish that he didn't die the way that he did. I might make a story myself.

An excellent begining! I like your style, it shows promise. Please, continue. I want to read more. ^_^

CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz plz..

it's ultra mega giga .. GREAT!! you have to continue this story ..IT'S AN ORDER OK?!?!

so yeah..i think i've said everything i wanted to say.. so if you want of course..

keep up the good work!!