that's . . .kewl. i never thought of that u should keep goin. as u might have noticed, i'm a fluff luver. and make-out sessions are always good to throw in the mix 2. L*ER

You know your writing skills are just too good for the sort of nonsense foisted on us in the second chapter. Personally, I love sticking to canon as much as possible, but I do make allowances for a well written different point of view.

The first chapter was great, set the proper tone and all, but then you went an added a Legolas point of view, and wow was it a stinker. It's like a badly written copy of "The Graduate". I had this horrifying flash of Dustin Hoffman in a long blonde wig grabbing the bride at the wedding and well...you know how it goes. The idea was bad in that movie and ludicris in this story.

Please, don't embaress yourself like this in the future.

OH! KEEP WRITING! I like it!

Write more!

started well and ended badly *grins*
the scene where legolas snatches the bride reads like a scene from a corny romantic novel.
plus i dont think aragorn wld harm legolas for stealing a horse -- more like for stealing the bride

he squeaky hammer. *runs through neighborhood hitting people with squaky hammer* I really like this story! Your very good at wrting like dotdotdot Middle Earthean. (Is that a word? I dont know, but if its not it should be) I think its better with two chapters, beacause that means more Lego, and more Lego is always good. *hits self with squeaky hammer* I hate when I do that, this story is *not* about how hot little prince elf is. Anyway dotdotdot, Im going now to look at more of your stories! Again, you did a beautiful job with your words!

Ooh.. this is interesting! I can almost imagine the uproar Legolas caused. How did Aragorn react? Did he know about Legolas' feelings towards Eowyn?

Yay! A squeaky hammer thing bob! Lol, sorry it took me so long to review, stupid comp, stupid mom-who-decides-to-clean-out-the-garage-that-happens-to-be-a-runner-up-for-the-7th-wonder-of-the-world...Anyhow, coolies, and Legolas is MINE! The ONLY crush i've had in about...a week. Heh.

Whoa! That was a very bold and valior move. Ya know I gotta add this one to my list o' favs.

Hey this is a good story! Stop being so vague and quit messing around and more people will read and review it! its a good story just get serious and keep writing it has definate potential

Cerasi

Hi! *waves* Where's my squeaky hammer?
Wow. Legolas...okaaaaaaay. That is a little desperate, if I may say. But it was alright...
Why do you hate Faramir? I personally think that he's a perfectly respectable guy, even if he married someone who could've done differently. But that's just me. Keep going...and hopefully, write longer chapters!

*Laughs. I didn't realize this was supposed to be a one-parter. But yay! You continued anyway. ^_^ I always thought that Legolas and Eowyn would make a good pair. I wondered why he never had one... Well, it's good so far. Continue!

Erika

oooh sqeauky hammer thing amabob i could hit my sister with that! poor Faramir he's all alone. he's not number one in anyones heart except maybe Bory's but his his only brother :S i'm not making sense!

Puffball or not us girlies will continue to yearn for our georgous Elf! Ok,seriously,it is nice to read a bit of old fashioned romance now and again and sweeping her out like that-sigh,wonderful.

I want my squeaky mallet in octarine (u read Pratchett, right?) And that was too darn short! DIE! *stabs with inflatable sword*