Wow. This was so beautiful and simple - love it!

That was good. I liked it.

I like it. Simple and yet striking (like Hermione's eyes? lol)

Oh... that was so well written! Beautifully descriptive.

And the flow was flawless.

I love it.

And the last line gave me some urge to laugh. I'm not sure why. I guess it's because I'm not really fond of the H/G pairing, so I LOVE that you wrote that...

Anyway, wondrous work. Congratulations. I'm sure you've heard it all.

This was very well written. "She turns to her love; not you" is a brilliant sentence, the way it expresses his desire, and his resignation, and all sorts of other angsty things, and the way you expressed the finality of her attachment to Ron by using a semicolon rather than a comma is just great. Saying more with less, as it were.

This also captures the characters really well. It's Ron's way to just say things as they are, without any beating around or what have you, and Harry is the quiet contemplative one who would say something poetic while Ron just says "brown".

Just wonderful. Thanks for posting.

I have just one word for it: SPECTACULAR. A very simple, short story but it has much more than it seems, it has a lot of feeling and profoundity. Most of all, I would describe it as ironic. Very ironic. I loved the ending, and I really liked how you played with the irony in the whole story. You don't put anything textually, but the reader really gets the meaning. Absolutely loved it.

Aww. I liked this. It was so cute and simple... I liked it a lot.

Really beautiful )

it was a little confusing on my part, but other than that it was really good

Oh..my..god... This is so beautiful and sad.*sniffles* Awesome short fic.

That was beautiful. Absolutely and completely beautiful. The way you write it is so creative and imaginative. Describing her eyes, and somehow you know who it is you're talking about: Hermione. You can somehow tell that it's Harry talking, and that Ginny is the one who sits beside him. And it really makes your eyes water as you feel what Harry feels: this longing that will never be fulfilled. All in all just...beautiful.

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Hi, this was recommended here months ago:
http:/talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic2369

gosh, thats sad! I mean, realyl sad! Poor HArry. Gosh, you write it so well though. still, its sad

This is just too brilliant. And that's saying something. Personally, I'm not a fan of H/Hr but in this fic...wow.
Lemme tell you, unrequited love is the BEST!

Okay first, this makes no sense.
Second, do you have something against brown eyes?