Good writing! It flows...

*laughs* nice tess, very nice

OOH! I like this one. Sounds like it came from her mouth. SCORE!! Sehen Sie Sie.

Coolies! Or should I say "Abuday!" Get it? Anyways it's a very nice poem and I like it. Written just right. Uh, yeah. Bye.



Lisboa Miraflores

Weirdness and uniqueness achieved.

Nice use of phonetic rhyme with the accent and all. Great casting with Rogue as a Siren and just the right amount of explanation.

Good Job.

wow, this sounds so good! i like!

LT: Ohhhhhhhhh, nifty.
T: Is that word even still used?
LT: Of course it is. And I think it works well in this context.
T: What ever you say sugarplum.
LT: Just shut up!! Anyway, very good poem.

Wow....that was pretty good! Short, but straight to the point. This went pretty well with Rogue and her personality. I especially liked how you ryhmed while keeping it in line. The ending seemed right. Can't imagine Rogue actually getting over her shyness to touch someone because of her power though, but after all that she has to endure, I'm sure she would give into something like that. Great song. I liked it. Hope you come up with some more stuff soon. Ciao. ^_~

Good. I like it.


Amber AKA Contradiction

hey, that's kinda cool...:)