A better ending for Will and Francie, perhaps. The only way he could have retained a real life, certainly. But so sad for the Bristows. Good job.

Yay for Francie and Will! Would have liked to have seen a little more detail about the 'Bristow's last stand' but this was an awesome fic.

Oooh. And I see the ending came together beautifully :) And I still like this. Hee.

Diana

Because there are too many Jess's in the world...wonderful detailage, Rach, with so much consistancy going on between it. The coffee grinds to styrofoam to Pop Rocks (heh)...don't know if it was intentional or not but it just *worked*, paralleling the gritty texture of each physical object with the rough and myraid WillThoughts to go with each. Great job with that.

This is lovely, Rach!
//He can be forceful, but only on his terms…only if teetering carefully on the edge of politeness.// That hits home! Will and I are the same person!
Wonderful, dear!
M

frillage!

YAY!

great writing yet again...loved it

so i guess francie knows now?