Yay! I loved how you put some *cross season/fandom* romance into it, and the "putting us authors and readers inot the fanfic thing" Great, great, great job! Loved it!

Can you include Ken in this?

actually,the most powerful pokemon is arceus

can we suggest matches?

Cool story. :)

Going to read others.

I have read many things, but this had definnetly caught my eye.This is pure genious from beginning to end.I wish there were more stories like this.

DUDE

It's uh, it's down there somewhere.

Lemme take another look.

very good

WHOAH! What a cool story!

Misty's using her staryou, her starmie is purple.

nice work and also nice torture there with little ashy boy and that was the coolest fic that I had ever read in my entire life!

maybe next time you can add me in there and I can able to have my newest form as well as my martial arts to boot.

your pal,

Gundamknight

One of the best fics. I've ever read.

Aww... Real nice story... But what happened to Bahamon (anything to do with Bahamut?) and Wizardmon?

Only one little thing... You got Starmie and Staryu mixed up, but never mind.

*applauds* Bravo! Bravo! Very Good! You are going on my favorites list! *presses button* Yippee!

Very cute. I love Mewtwo. A little weird, but overall, nicely done. And you even managed to include Wizzie! Yay!