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Reviews For: Reconnecting

SetsunaFanGirl 2004-04-09 ch 2, anon.	abusePlease please please update! It's a cool fic. I wish I had found it sooner. Have you tried advertising this fic a bit? It's sad to only see 3 reviews.. Great work though!
Sakura cc 2003-11-23 ch 2,	abuseWAH! I luv LINA! PLZ continue, i beg of u not to leave this fic unfinished tears PLZ!
Akujin666 2003-02-08 ch 2,	abuseHIIIIEEE!!! laughs Nearly instant update!! I guess it's mostly because of how late it was that I reviewed, eh? Well anyways first off, you've been very cruel...you haven't said what The Crossing is!! Only that it is some sort of prophecy and everyone doesn't like it, not one bit. sighs and mutters 'so unfair'Oh well, I shall wait then for the next chapter. On with it now, about what Rack is talking about at the beginning, he says that if Willow exploded he would be lucky to get out alive. Then when you have Lina step in you say that Willow is just a laugh compared to her. How is it that Rack was able to stand up to Lina so long, and she was in fear of actually losing(at least it seemed so to me at one point), if he would have had a hard time with Willow? 'She stayed on her side for awhile but after some time we were comfortably snuggled up against each other and soon sound asleep.' Buffy and Tara were snuggled up or all three of them? I believe it's the three, but then that's because I've already read the entire thing. Why does he say she has such little control over powers? I thought she was a sorcery genious, or whatever it is she says, after all she can cast spells no one else can and not have them destroy everything. Sidekick? Rack had a sidekick? I like that, 'No babbling in your head for awhile, Willow' Happy thoughts, and sleeeeeeeeeeeep. How come when Lina cast the Dragu Slave it didn't blow up more stuff then just Rack's dwelling? sighs happily much needed battling!! Evil, evil such underhanded things to say. More battling!! Die Rack!!! 'L-sama, do they always have to boom like this?' Nice, I never really noticed that, just that the evil person always has their minions act when they should do it themselves. Laguna Blade, nods serves him right. Ugh, Dawn. She seems so spoiled all the time, I like how it seems kind of like she's just ticked she's always treated like a child, and that everyone thinks she doesn't have any good input. The part where Anya is like 'Lina INVERSE?' after when you say 'the name was rooted in Japan I think' do you mean that it's in history or that that's where the name comes from? Hehehee, lazy dragons. Awww, more happy sappy stuff. It kinda look like Buffy is having more feeling, because she's like skipping down the stairs. Who'd Giles call?? And AGAIN!! What's the Crossing?!?!?! Is Faith coming? tries to remember Did she die when she went to LA? I can't remember. Confrontation, poor Willow, poor Tara. Nooooooo!!! More I must know about!! What's happened to Xander? Who's the person he was talking to?? ARGH!! Gold or silver!! That REMINDS me!! Are you EVER going to write more of Stars in Love?!?! And when's Xelloss going to show up again? Phew it's a good thing you explained what you meant by spiked, I would have been SO confused otherwise. 'To underline my words a heavy looking sword, with a green hilt and a long blade decided to pop into existence' EXcellent! Anyways, everything seems pretty good with speeling and whatnot, just a few missing words, and mess ups on when's and then's. Um...I've finsihed reading Mistletoes, I just have to go back and review it. Well I think that is it! Good speed on your next chapter or fic! And good luck with, Maia was it, and keeping on a roll. BAI BAI
Akujin666 2003-02-03 ch 1,	abuseHIIIEE!!! It's me Akurei566! I decided this was ther easiest way to review. Okie rubs hand together I really liked this. There were a lot of concepts in here that were new to me, never even thought of. In the prologue, is that Xellos who is watching everything, and is watch he is observing Willow calling Buffy back? All that stuff happening to Willow really sucks. She's one of my favorite characters, and to have her going through so much with her withdrawl and with no one helping even though they see her struggling. Oh! How did Lina get into this world? And what exactly was it that Giles did for Lina? ARGH!! What is 'The Crossing' ?!?!?! I love how you've protrayed Anya, you've seemed to capture her very well. I think you should at least tell more about Anya and Daryial's connection, before you decide whether or not to toss him away. Also I want to know more about Anya's past with Xellos, ex's you say. YAY!!! Spike's DEAD!! I never liked him very much, because he is always harassing Buffy and co. I liked Lina's thought while the whole Buffy/Spike thing is going on. What exactly happened to Willow when she was with Rack? It's so sad here, poor poor Willow. She's so depressed and she didn't have the determination to resist Rack. YAY!! Sea of Chaos, reference to Slayers. Um...I'm guessing that Lina lost Amelia somehow, because you referred to her at one point(Lina) as a 'normal' hero. Why'd Lina tell Buffy her name was Scarlet? I want to know more about Anya's past and how she knows the magics that Lina does. I like you description on how it seems to Willow that Tara was reaching out to her. Go Lina's fiery temper!! ARGH!! I want to see what's going to happen to Rack!! You seem to mix up then with when, and you sometimes also mix up where with there. And at least one point(I don't want to go throught the entire thing again to find it) you say much instead of many. The part I'm talking is when Lina is thinking about how there weren't very many vampires from where she grew up. I don't think there were too many other mistakes, just basically a few wrong words. wipes brow phew, it's been a long time since I've reviewed such a long story er....chapter. Well I hope you write more soon! Also, this isn't for this story, but please write more on TFG!! Ah well, I'm done. BAI BAI

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