like the first one LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

It's taken me several read throughs to think of how to review this piece...It's brilliant! I enjoy it more every time I read it. I am truly looking forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Jay

I have only recently discovered this fan fiction site,and I must say these to stories had me on the edge of my seat trying to figure out which turn the story was next going to take. All the things a good story should have. It has been a pleasure of finding such good stories with these characters. I just hope that Emma's character can contiue to grow even if the IDIOTS at the production company think they have to fix things that isn't broke. Anyway, keep up the good work. I have some short stories I am working on and hope I can come 1/2 as good as so many of you do.

Good ending! Just hoped it didn't have to end though. oh well. can't wait to read your next fic. =)

OH GIRL! talk about a clifhanger!

Hurry! i wanna know what happens!

Wow. Emma might be alive? Can't wait to read what happens next. Please continue soon! =)

don't stop, this is great!!

OMG. this is such a great fanfic. depressing but great. You're such a talented writer! Sorry I didn't review sooner, somehow I missed this fanfic (I blame it on all my schoolwork). Anywayz. please do continue soon.=)

Hiya, love the story so far. Sorry I haven't reviewed before, I know the feeling where you feel like no one cares about you. Its depressing and slightly demoralizing...hint hint, nudge nudge (not you have to go read and review my fiction!) Me and Flyaway have set up a reviews anonymous group which you should join. It helps us deal with the pain of not having reviews... or atleast thats the aim of it eventually. Anyways, I love the whole descriptive factor of your stories, it brings the words to life...creates some brilliant images mental images...or maybe thats just me...the voices in my head are telling me to go away now.

Nicely done..and thank goodness for a little Shal and Emma, finally. You seem to have captured them both, particularly Shalimar. I've always wanted to see more done with her feral side.
The boys did seem a little off, in terms of their reactions...a little out of character.

Nicely done..and thank goodness for a little Shal and Emma, finally. You seem to have captured them both, particularly Shalimar. I've always wanted to see more done with her feral side.
The boys did seem a little off, in terms of their reactions...a little out of character.

good chapter! keep going! is emma gonna "revive" or something or is she gonan stay dead? Keep up the good work.

Good story! Please continue!

poor Shal-please keep writing i want to know whats happening with emma and Shal

good stpry. i know, i'm greedy, but could you please put even more shalimar in it??