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Reviews For: The Innocence I Never Had
Dark Chobit 2004-05-07 . chapter 1
Aw! This is such a great story! You should make a continuation or something - well, you're the author, not me. But still, it's great to read a story where Kuwabara isn't bashed, and Hiei isn't such a grumpy-pants. And the detail was wonderful!!
Izumi K. 2003-12-12 . chapter 1
Aw. How sweet. Hiei with a niece and actually caring and...and...and... Aw, it's just adorable. I mean just...wow...
Jesscheaux 2003-05-01 . chapter 1
Oh so cute! Hiei as an Uncle! little Kagami is so kawaii! And I totally agree with you DOWN WITH KUWABARA BASHING! This was a really good fic, I'm glad I found your bio, you rock! Its hard to find good Yu Yu Hakusho fics out there! I've started writing one myself but I didn't post it yet. Well, keep on writing!
Spiraling Vortex 2003-01-27 . chapter 1
Aww, that's so cute! write some more!
Matoko Shizaki 2003-01-24 . chapter 1
I'm working on doing a sequel from when Kagami is 14 or 15 and goes to the Dark Tournament. Bring kleenex for this one cuz hiei's coming along too!
dark messiah 2003-01-24 . chapter 1
So cute! I say cute a lot today... Anyway, keep writing!
Rei-hime 2003-01-23 . chapter 1
Rei-hime: Oh! So very, very sweet!!!! I love it! (sigh)I wish Hiei could have a kid and be loved. It's just so sweet, him and Kagami!!!!

Ashi: Feh!

Rei-hime: Oh come on, you thought it was sweet too.

Ashi: Hn!

Rei-hime: Come on.....

Ashi: ...........(chin quivers) it was......(bursts into tears)WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! I WANT MY DADDY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rei-hime: O.O Oh, god......(picks him up and cuddles him)ano, it's okay, it's okay. Wow, you made him express emotion. It's REALLY good!! (looks at animegirl3)No, it wasn't "Tomo and Kurama's daughter" like the daughter of Tomo and Kurama. It was Tomo and the daughter of Kurama. Uh, is that right? ^^; Well, it was very good. I hope you do more fics with Kagami. Ja.

Ashi: (sniffle)Want my daddy, want my mama......

Rei-hime: It's okay, akachan. Let's go get you some ice cream.

Ashi: (cheers up) Yay!
Reikachan14 2003-01-23 . chapter 1
OOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I love this soooo much!!! You have to update!!!! I wanna see what happens!!! Please update!!!!! Hurry!! This is so sweet!!!
BD the Pixie 2003-01-23 . chapter 1
KAWAII! THAT WAS ADORABLE!! (tears)

i usually like the funny fics best, but that was GREAT!!
Mei Hurasaki 2003-01-23 . chapter 1
Mei: MOOTO-CHAN!!! WAI THAT WAS GOOD!!!! Too kawaii!!! *Waves chibi victory flag* Kagami rulez!!!!!!!
Goten: Ho boy, here we go again!
Videl: That Hiei guy sounds interesting...
Goten: O.O Nani! What about Nii-chan?!
Videl: Umm... *blushes*
Mei: OMG a sign of the appocolypse! Videl liked a story! But then again, this was an awsome story!!!!
Videl: *Nods*
Goten: Nii-chan....poor poor nii-chan... Good story tho!
*Mei and Videl facefault*
Mei: Keep up the good work! I wanna read more about Kagami. Oh one thing...why did Yusuke's kid and Kurama's wife have the same name..prolly just a typo. I wanna know what Kagami means..MORE SOON
~Mei-chan
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