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| DarkAngelGuardian 2007-03-22 ch 24, | abuseI loved this. You write the characters very well. I can't wait for your next installment with Alice. |
| Nickolaus Pacione 2004-03-24 ch 24, | abuseDamn this is a ** up write. You did a good job with Thomas Harris' creation and made it your own here. But I can say this much, you are a hell of a horror writer -- stay with it. |
| Gothika Thorn 2003-10-04 ch 24, | abusethis is so... WOW! I'm just in awe! |
| Sunni 2003-04-20 ch 24, anon. | abuseGood job, Kurt. Sorry it took so long to read this chapter. I was a little slow to warm to this fic but as soon as you got me hooked that was the end of me! I was very pleased to see that the ending has allowed for a sequal. Good job, as per usual. Sunni. |
| Morbid724 2003-04-11 ch 24, | abuse*Applauds* Bravo, Kurt!! Let it be a yellow Civic...*drops to knees and prays* Please...please let it be a yellow Civic. I have a think for canary-yellow cars...*shrug* Poor Alice! *Hugs Alice* *sneaks in magic makers* now you can write conversations on your walls. Like so -- *demonstrates* *writes 'Jesus Saves' on wall* *Underneath writes -- 'And Moses takes the rebound'* See? No, not eyes, *rephrases* See what I mean? *Pulls out Windex* *sprays drooling inmates Plexiglas barrier* I hope Alice writes a note to HIM. Now, now Alice, Demons and ghosts don't live in cracks, they live in closets, and under cots in mental hospitals. *Grins evilly* :D What a cute Farwell gift from Alice. Oh c'mon Joshie, you know you like her just a little bit. C'mon. *Snuggles* hehe. *Swoon* *drool* All right, Alice, I'll share if you'll share. *Cuddles Joshie* *light bulb appears over Morb's head* I know! Let's cut him in half and you get on piece and I get the other. Just like the poster, remember? :D Sound fair? *Brings out the chainsaw* >:D Oh, Joshie...This won't hurt a bit. He's really cute when he's scared. :D Aw...cute way to end that, Kurt, but I do have to say, if Alice knows about the Herald-Tribune, China-Mail thing, she could peep in on Clarice and her daddy's love letters...ew... Really great story, Kurt! I loved it! Can't wait for the sequel! I'll be looking forward to seeing Joshie and...*Grumbles* Alice too. I like her, even though she may try to get MY guy. *Dreamy sigh* *smirk* *kicks Alice underneath the table* Again -- Great Job! Morbid. |
| Shifter1 2003-04-10 ch 24, | abusethis is sequel material... is there going to be a sequel? i think there should be... love the ending... bit of a cliffie! ga? anyhow, i have an appointment with my therapist byesee byesee cheerio, old bean. and do, keep this absolutely spiffing story going... i am dreadfully intrigued... ha, okay... back to insanity in the real world... eh?! C.FISH |
| icky 2003-04-09 ch 24, anon. | abuseloved it! really sypathetic for Alice in this final chapter...she seemed so vulnerable. i am really looking forward to the sequel...hint hint. |
| Saavik 2003-04-09 ch 24, anon. | abuse'She was crazier than a long-tailed cat in a room full of rocking chairs.' LMFrAO! that was sweet... Alice and Josh... The letter was awesome as well. Can't believe its over... *just noticed the little FIN at the bottom... heheheh* Wonderful adventure once again, Koit. ~S~ |
| LoT 2003-04-09 ch 24, anon. | abuseWhoa! What a chapter! Josh going to see Alice was great, I had to remind myself not to feel to much sympathy- she is a murderer, all the same though, I'm glad she'll have Clarice as her shepard. I didn't get much H/C interaction, but her reaction to the letter stands for a promising sequel, where perhaps she will finally let her heart guide her? We'll see. |
| Steel 2003-04-09 ch 24, | abuseWell done Kurt. I am especially pleased with the ending! It's been a great ride Poobah, Thank you! Steel- |
| Clariz 2003-04-08 ch 24, | abuseI loved this compelling story!. Was lucky that I got to read it in two shots and loved every minute of it. |
| Holly Jolly 2003-04-08 ch 24, | abuseAh, a very nice chapter. Great endings between Alice and Josh; Clarice and the GD. This was a wonderful story, I remained enthralled from the beginning to the end. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Holly |
| EbonyFox 2003-04-08 ch 24, | abusefantastic end. i applaud you. |
| Morbid724 2003-04-08 ch 23, | abuseI can just see it now. -- Alice in her tiny cell, drawing eyes on her wall saying... "I'll never tel...any of you...any of you..." LMAO! :D "Don't Say a Word"...good movie, I thought...*shrug* She realy reminded me of the girl in there, in this chappie at least... Yes...you got past the happy FBI people...well that's good...Whippersnappers? Graham isn't THAT old, is he? He sounds like one of my substitute reading teachers -- which is not a good thing, since our substitute reading teacher is a old woman in reality -- Get him to say 'Boulderdash' or 'Blast it!' or 'Bah-humbug' and he'll REALLY start to sound like her...*shudder* And I liked the way you said "A few good meals…" Kinda makes you wonder what's in that chicken, and if the GD has actually kidnapped Ardelia and she really IS making the dinner. *Pats Ardelia on the back* Oysters…heh…sorry if that hurt, Del. Unworthy? *Tilts head* no way! *Drool* My HERO…*Swoon* *Cuddles Joshie* mine mine MINE *Is about to get violent with anyone who attempts to tell her that Joshie is not hers* Gr…MINE MINE!! Be mah vowelintine? *Offers a pathetic, pitiful look* I loved the part about our GD being proud of Alice for setting Eddie up. >:D Nice job on that, Koit. A whole YEAR? -- I volunteer to drive the getaway car! *Waves enthusiastically* *Shrug* it's worth a shot, you know, even if I won't be old enough then still anyway... Maybe while he's teaching her to fool the people into thinking she's incompetent, he'll teach her origami too…*Shrug* *Has watched RD too many times already* Extra many points for drawing eye pictures. (I drew a picture in science once of our ebil Science teacher playing marbles with the dissected frog's eyes…-- after that *I* was declared incompetent to handle the scalpel…Life is so unfair!) Alice…acting as if she's lost her marbles? Got some screws loose up there? -- Maybe she'll start hearing voices too…*eyes LoT*… Excellent Chappie. Good Work. Morbid (with a rather violent case of the hiccups) |
| MK in La La Land 2003-04-08 ch 24, | abuseWonderful ending! At first I could have cared less for Alice, but now you made me feel sorry for her! Plus she did make me laugh when she was drawing eyes on the wall. |