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Thistle
2003-12-14 . chapter 1
I think Race needs some love...
Sparker
2003-03-06 . chapter 1
lol this was really cute!

i LOVE LOVE LOVE your stories. dont know how i missed you for so long.

love, sparker
GLimmer Conlon O'Leary
2003-01-25 . chapter 1
I absolutely adore Race. He's so great. Sounds just like him too! Wow...thats so cute! O my gawd the part about Itey and Snitch? So true! My DAD watched Newsies and said they were gay together! I, of course, "Ugh!"d but....AWwwwww...Wow...so adorable...the sarcasm that Race has naturally, and it seems you do as well, is so magnificent...thaynx for makin me laugh chica.

And makin me smile, beacuse like Mush's Skittles said to me in an Email, great cousin of mine say that this is equally sweet nad funny. How right she was.

Chelci
Angel of Harmony
2003-01-25 . chapter 1
This is the first story of yours I'm reviewing, but I've read everything you've posted so far, and loved it all. Finally, someone who understands the wonders of Jack/David! When I first saw the movie, that was the only slash pairing I saw (don't know how I didn't notice Mush/Blink at first), and since David and Jack are my two favorite characters, that's the pairing I support the most. Therefore, your stories make my day. Your writing style is excellent, and your ideas are creative and exciting. You have a wonderful grasp of character and dialogue as well. So, basically, I just want to say that your work is awesome, and that you are a very talented writer- and I can't wait to read the next thing you write.
Jackamiah Meaney
2003-01-24 . chapter 1
This incorporated, like, all of my fav. couples. lmao. i wanna see who wins _that_ bet, y'know? well, totally *heart* your stuff! can't wait for more!
AaronLohrLover24
2003-01-23 . chapter 1
Super cute story! Very original and creative. I enjoyed it :)
~Sprite~
misprint
2003-01-23 . chapter 1
dammit! why you write so goodnik? ark. i seriously can't find anything wrong with this story, it's awesome. kinda sad, kinda cute, kinda chilling and kinda poignant all at the same time.

heh heh heh. "mornin', snitch." that's perfect. the whole itey/snitch thing was great, as was mush and blink. but mush and blink are a given.

enough with my rambling. seriously, this is really awesome. i love it lots. you've inspired me to go write slash...

*evil grin*

oh the pairings...

awesome work, hun.

-misprint
here's yer knife
Thumbsucker Snitch
2003-01-23 . chapter 1
Like was expected, I am reviewing. ^^
You're really tickled by the NewsboyxNewsboy group, aintcha? ^^; Anyhoo...
It's very adorable. Not gonna mention the pairing thing, 'cause you know my opinion on that ^^;. But it's slash, so it's ALL~ good. ^^ Completly adorable, very well done. Race's character was captured to perfection. Love it! ^^
Mush's Skittles
2003-01-23 . chapter 1
Ah ha ha ha. I don't know why this is so funny. I can see a 2003 version, with myself as Race. LOL I'd be sayin "DUDE!" after every sentance. ha ha. Ahh I luf Mush and Blink tagether. "If Itey and Snitch are a couple of newlyweds, then Blink and Mush are married, settled, and have three kids." ha ha ha I don't know why I like that so much. I love their 'conversation.' ha ha. WOW ya have to be in my history class to get that one. Anyway. This is great. It's hilar. I'm done babbling now. Ha ha. He he. LOL. DAMN i am shutting up now. LOL this is hilar.

Skittles
studentnumber24601
2003-01-23 . chapter 1
Awww, adorable. I have to say, I definitely see Mush/Blink and Jack/David, and I think it's communicated just like you describe... And your first person is brilliant. This is cute and warm and fuzzy. Lovely.

24601
Blinks-Tiger
2003-01-23 . chapter 1
very very nice. ::applauds:: Congratulations on a job well done.

-Tiger
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