   Vilkath 2007-06-09 . chapter 8Not a bad idea, not the best reason ever for Ranma or Usagi leaving but not to bad. All though I must say Ranma's reason for leaving was suprisingly weak, while Usagi's was darker then I would have expected. Total reversal of the usual stuff. Any ways while the dbz side trip was a required a bit, I sort felt the whole thing went a little to smoothly. No one acted like their normal selves, Ranma accepted some one was better to easily, just seemed like nothing was real. About the only aspect of this story that wasn't rushed or hurried was the growing relationship between Usagi and Ranma. Sadly like just about every other Ranma/Usagi fic i've ever read this one is incomplete. The basic background of them being special in a past past life was interesting, but it didn't really go any where before you stopped writing. |
 Princess Asuna 2007-04-03 . chapter 8so far so good a story, the grammer needs a little touched up as does the spelling. but all and all a good start. but sadly ill assume u have no intentions of finishing this story which kinda disappoints me as i would really love to know what will happen next |
 Shauneice Harris 2006-12-31 . chapter 8 omg i love this stor2y u have so got to write more soon it is going 2 b so hard to wait 4 u 2 finish so please hurry up with a double cheese burger no onions extra pickles a medium fry a hot fudge sundae and 2 apple pies from mcdonalds on top!11 |
| Dumbledork 2006-06-20 . chapter 8 Nice story. Write more. |
 Hunter Hatake and Neko Uchiha 2006-05-16 . chapter 8this great story pleaz write more soon |
| Love 2006-05-07 . chapter 8 Why Haven't you add more to this story in over five years?
This story is really good!
I can't wait to see what's next!
Ranma/Usagi Forever!
Please add more real soon! |
| BloodyHell91 2006-04-09 . chapter 8 lil' weird, then again how many crossovers are going to be in this fic? |
| Bobboky 2005-05-04 . chapter 8 excellent |
| Lord of the Pit 2005-04-05 . chapter 8 please update whenever possible. |
| Suuki-Aldrea 2005-03-08 . chapter 8 WOW! I can't wait till you update! Ja ne! |
| Suuki-Aldrea 2005-03-07 . chapter 1 Awsome begining. I hope I have time to read the rest today. |
 dogbertcarroll 2004-12-12 . chapter 8You really need to work on the details. |
| dogbertcarroll 2004-12-12 . chapter 7 Your fight scenes need a lot of work. Ranma does know weapons. He's fought a lot of people that are
weapon users. |
| dogbertcarroll 2004-12-12 . chapter 6 Much too fast and kinda bland. |
| dogbertcarroll 2004-12-12 . chapter 5 DBZ is one of the worst possible crossovers
stories available. All of them end up with
massive world destroying powers that make Saturn
look like a piker.
Takes some of the fun out of the story. |
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