  izumi-chan 2003-10-30 . chapter 4 hehehe.. very funny.. i like it... cant wait for the next chapter.. XD |
 Darkside Phantom 2003-10-10 . chapter 4LOL! Extremely funny stuff, personally, I think Tsuzuki makes a funny pervert ^^
One request, when Tsuzuki and Hisoka talk back and forth (like at the very beginning of the first chapter) for a long while could you put in 'said Hisoka' or 'Tsuzuki sighed' or something like that every once in a while? It's just sometimes you forget who's talking or lose track.
Still, great story, can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^ |
| TehMeev 2003-09-02 . chapter 4 this is great ^^ write more soon!
anata no Marron |
| sADE 2003-08-16 . chapter 4 *SNORT, PFFT, SNORT* please wait while i roll on the floor laughing...
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*WHEEZE!* you are SO funny, it's amazing, you are a wonderful writer. update soon! ;) |
| venedy 2003-08-05 . chapter 4 Yahoo!
U updated! Looks like I can expect the coming days of Hisoka and Tsuzuki to be more messed up huh?
Hm...but i still think that ur 1st and 2 nd chappie was much more humourous.
Can u add more humour to ur next ficcie?
I know I'm greedy. But PLEASE?
*puppy eyes* |
| Sera Luanma 2003-08-04 . chapter 4 OMFG! I can't believe this! Hisoka and Tsuzuki are going through the exact same things I do when I have to babysit my cousins! It's hilarious I tell you! Demon-spawn! *cough* I mean... -_-; Write more soon, ne?
Ja bai bai ~ K-ko |
| Sheil Kuroi 2003-08-03 . chapter 1 hehe *giggles* this story is too cute. I definatly makes you think of all the responsiblity that a parent has to go through. And these two men definatly make interesting parents. But I love the humor and yet mature content too great job ^_^ (not to mention the couple *cheezy hisokaxTsuski grin*) |
| perablah 2003-08-03 . chapter 4 bwahahahaha. This is SO going on my fave stories list |
| Meriitite 2003-08-03 . chapter 4 LOL...
"Hisoka? Where are you going?"
"To the room to take a good long look at my pathetic life as a Shinigami."
Yeah, that was great. I do hope the kids take it a little easier on the poor guys...don't know how much more the two can handle... |
| Ishxy 2003-08-03 . chapter 4 Another one of your hilarious chapters...*applaudes* This chapter's really great. *takes out a box of Kleenex and wipes the tears* It's okay, I didn't spot any errors in this one! ^_^ Hahaha, your fic made my day. It probably took out my headache. ^^;; Thanks! |
| Sakusha-san 2003-08-03 . chapter 4 If you had asked me before i would have said i wanted a little girl when i have children.Now i dont even wanr a bird for a pet.If i want something to look after i'll play with my digimon. |
| Literary Eagle 2003-08-02 . chapter 4 Another fun chapter! I loved it when Hisoka drank an entire carton of juice just to end the discussion! ^_^ |
| broccoli 2003-07-27 . chapter 2 aw... domestic bliss. XD XD XD |
| Ricca-chan (too lazt to log in^^) 2003-06-21 . chapter 3 *laughing* Gosh, it's so hilarious! *still laughing* I can't stop laughing, BWAHAHAHAHA! More, more! Please update the story soon, Mirai-san! Looking forward to the next chappie ^_~ *throws confetti* |
| Literary Eagle 2003-06-08 . chapter 3 Ah, a classic battle between men and diapers. ^_~ Funny stuff! |
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