hello..you might be wondering why you're receiving this review.. it's because I figured that the very first fics written would be complete..^^ I loved this and I listened to The Ache of My Heart by Fuji while reading this.. it hurts.. but the ending was great!
~MysticBlood

this was such a warm and fussy read. -throws self away and cuddles tezufuji- ^_^

that seemed so sappy.

but oh well, it was a good short drama.

:D

just one word: beautiful!

OMG! that was so cool/cute in a way..

^.^ Ooh so kawai-the ending was so good!! ^_^ Great job-I loved it :P

I do like the story - it's very good. ^_^ In light of that, I hope you won't mind if I give you some constructive critism.

Your english grammar needs work. It's not too bad - you just have some problems with quotation and a few other things. This can be fixed with a beta reader, so it's not such a big deal.

However, if there's one thing I hate, it's fangirl Japanese. 'Ore wa baka desu' is technically correct grammar, but it doesn't mean 'I am really an idiot'. Just 'I am an idiot'. Also, to add 'desu' on the end is a sign of minor politeness. Do you think someone in turmoil, talking to themselves, it going to be speaking politely? It's true that Fuji's speech is semi polite in the anime, but that's not really human. Basically, just don't put Japanese in it at all. It may look impressive to some people, but to others, you're just making a fool out of yourself.

Ovverall, nice work. ^_^

That was swet ^-^
Please write more !

AAAAAAAAH, KAWAII DESU!!

You're a prety good author, you know!! I always love Tezuka x Fuji, tee-hee ... the world needs more Tezuka x Fuji, definitely!! We're both TxF fans, ne? =D

Keep on writing! I wanna read more TxF!! *crazy fangirl*

That is the sweetest Tezuka-Fuji thing I've ever read! You are surely good! I'm a big fan of them and yea, I think you should continue writing! Really, really good work!

*sigh* very nice ficlet ... more?

This was cute! ^^ However, I think you confused tenses quite a bit... so it sort of amde things a little confuseing, especailly near the end. The angstign was nice though. I'm not a sadist. Honest. ^^

awww, don't cry, Fuji!

this has got to be the sweetest TezukaxFuji ever!

Aww... ;_; Angsty, but it's really sweet. *sniff* You did a good job with the delicate atmosphere & such. This has to be one of the best Tezuka/Fuji ficcy yet. ^_^ You did pretty good with the dialogs n all. XD Me likes~

Ja~
Sadamexx