oh my god. this is too cute! please continue this!!

This is cool! Please make more!

This is good!

Wow Ash the robot this is very intreasting.

OH WOW!! This story is so awesome! You and Dragoness are both on my favorite authors list now! :) I could never be able to make stories as awesomely wicked as this one!OH! please continue it! And if it's not to much trouble, could you help me with my writing? I really suck...Please continue!! I'm an Ash Ketchum fan all the way!! Okay, I'm done :3.

Well this story is shaping up well. I can't wait to read the next chapter. More soon please.

I just love this chapter. The way that the transition from ASH to Ash is written really brings the moment to life. Now, I find myself wondering how the Zeroth Law of Robotics will work its' way into this story.

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

I can't help it.. Aw... So cute.. Now I'm highly intimidated too. I don't think I can match up to this kind of thing..and there are too many similarities...agk...I'll try anyway, methinks.. Even if I do have a billion and one other fics I want to write too.. Do you ever have that problem? hehee...At least you keep writing them all..tho OI hasn't been updated in a while...Ah well..This was very nice.. I'll have to keep reading it, ne? *^_^*; Heeh...Um...Dunno what else to say.. Tat's all! *^_^*;

A few scenes stolen here and there... But that can be forgiven. Have you read all of the Isaac Asimov robots novels? (I, Robot; The Naked Sun; Robots and the Empire, etc.) It very clearly states that the Three Laws cannot be circumvented without annihilating the positronic circuitry - except when the definition of 'human', 'robot', 'harm' and 'existence' are twisted.

Okay, now I have to add your name to my favorite authors list. You have a gift for writing science fiction. I hope you get published someday, Joshua. And I look forward to reading more of your fanfiction.

Firstly, please tell me this is not a prediction of the future to come cos yeah.
Anyway this seems really interesting and i'm looking forward to reading more.

Hey Joshua! Glad to see youre still alive. Very neat idea I'd say.. looks kinda like The Matrix only a bit more positive for humans. I think. I hope to see the first chapter up soon! Ya hear that..? Soon. You know you want to. Please..? And OI would be nice. You have a nice way of setting up worlds. Keep it up.

interesting yet I'm sure I got all that. Was Megan a robot or not? could you make the next chapter I little easier to understand for someone like me? Please. If not I understand prefectly.