Reviews for The Redemption of the Deceivers

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gothic-hands 2006-02-09 ch 1,	abuseheehee, this looks like it'll be a great story!
Dreamer22 2005-12-26 ch 10,	abuseone thousand years? Dumbledore? wow just a smidge older then I thought him to be!
Dreamer22 2005-12-26 ch 11,	abusewow that was great! I liked the way Hermione found out and her reactions to everything were very Hermione tehe. Wow on the fight with Ron, very dead on in my opinions more or less on how both boys would react to the situation. I agree on the fact that if they made up right away it would not have been realistic, Ron hurt Harry to much for them to go right back, but you could still tell that Harry cared about Ron when they told him he would be practicing the curse on his at the time former best friend. I liek the idea of James going back to being 15, great way for him to get through things, only downer for James is that he misses having Sirius..or maybe thats a downer for Sirius...lol Yay for the potential sequal, but as it is now two and a half years after this fic has finished I will not hold my breath, but a girl can still hope right? :-D I love everything about the fic in general, fantastic!
Dreamer22 2005-12-26 ch 5,	abuseHaha the entrance of Padfoot was kick arse tehe I love the shock from James! great job!
Dreamer22 2005-12-26 ch 2,	abuseholy crud...again. terrific chapter tehe on the real Snape actually being his father who was pretending to be his teacher named Mr. Evans...lol Fangs? does that come from him being thought to be a Vampire? it would make sense...Oh and the whole picking a name thing is histerical!! I hope you are enjoying the onslaughter of reviews...even if the stories are finished already, they are coming so fast because I was was reading off line..anyway on to another review :-P
Dreamer22 2005-12-26 ch 1,	abuse::eyes open is shock:: holy crud...
Kira6 2005-05-29 ch 11,	abuseWhere is the sequel? Was there one?
zafaran 2005-03-22 ch 11,	abuseNice. I've added your story to my C2 community so other readers can find it. Keep up the good work in future stories. Zafaran
zafaran 2005-03-22 ch 6,	abuseOkay. Picky writer's point on the conversation with Ron and Hermione in the Potion Master's quarters. It's confusing, very confusing, and I had the scorecard for who is who and who is who's alias, as well as years and years of experience as both a reader and writer, and I had to reread it multiple times to get to what I thought you meant to say. You might want to rewrite that scene if you ever get a chance to revise this story. Other than that, this story is very interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with the future chapters. Keep up the good work. Zafaran
Silver-Entrantress-Elf 2005-03-18 ch 11,	abuseThis is so kool!! James is such a bad boy... Hehehehehe!
Lilyoftheearth 2005-01-09 ch 11,	abuseIs there really going to be a sequel? I hope so, this was an amazing read! Even though it turned out to be an AU because of OoTP.. I don't care. THis was utterly brilliant!
Potions and Snitches 2004-11-15 ch 1,	abuseHello wonderful author! :) This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile. Thank you for your story! :) It doesn't have a frog rating yet but it's on the list. Jan
Udontwannano 2004-10-12 ch 1, anon.	abusehate it
Warrior God 2004-08-17 ch 1,	abusei love this story cannot wait to the Sequel to Redemption of the Deceivers come out
BuDgE-HeAd 2004-07-15 ch 11,	abuseI LOVED THIS FIC! This is one of the best Severitus(?) fics I have read. I have never read a "James is still alive" fic, and this is such a great intro to it. I loved the slash, and the H/H, even though I am not particularly set in my ships. The way you killed off Voldy was great, and the ghostiness, awesome! I know this sounds rather gushy, but I looked for OOC-ness, and tried to be a Grammar Nazi, and I honestly couldn't find a thing. I tried as hard as I could. I saw maybe A typo. Nothing big that made me grit my teeth like when I read some fics, and the characterization was exactly as I would expect it to be in all situations. Having Sev be Harry's Nursery school teacher was AWESOME! It ave him a reason for him to love him and trust him automatically, and of course, he had been living with the idea of James being his father for years, so of course he would forgive him. I am really looking forward to the sequel, and in the meantime, I will read the rest of the works you have posted here. Please have there be a sequel! Even if it will be now AU, please have a sequel!

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