This story is really touching. I'm really sorry to hear about your father, but, I'm glad he told you to help others and keep writing. I hope he can rest now.

Win

oh my gosh!Linkin Park is my fave band!... Wow that sounded so preppy, creepy. This is an 'oh my god i wanna cry' story. It sounds really good. maybe you should play it out more.

Oh please continue this was really good!

wats the song at the end?

did you give up on this story? i mean, it hasn't been updated since 2006. i enjoyed reading this story. i'll be sad if you gave up on it for good. : (

hahaha I liked it when Pony was high on the meds:P Cute and... sad of course...

I'm gunna check if you've started the sequel or not and if you have and haven't finished it yet, Keep writing, and if you haven't, start it!

:)

That was great. Thanks for the story. Hope the next chapter is just as great.

that is really great!

i like the way the rape was handled, i'm very particular about it. i hate it when i read rape fics and in like two minutes the victim is fine.

if you write a sequel or whatever, just keep post-traumatic stress disorder in mind...it looks like you had it pretty well covered in this story, though, so good job.

Awesome, just awesome hope you continue it

u know that Johnny doesn't really like to talk and him and pony r like brothers

I think you should continue maby have johnny get hurt and dally gets real angry while ponyboy is still tryin to recover, please do not end this story

you're your own worst critic ~it really wasnt that bad.

I think it sould be TBC XD i love this storyy GREAT JOB!!