awesome story but it felt like u kinda rushed the ending but thats ok im perfectly content thank you!

i liked it. sequal please? (puppy eyes)

OMG i loved this last chapter and all the other chapters but especially this one and this might sound a bit sissy but this chapter actually made me cry which i don't do alot when i read stories. your story was really good i loved it keep up the good work.

Nice Story!

Fantastic story. Great detail and description. I can't think of other words to describe your stories I have read so far which are The Unexpected and (Time Flies) Kooin Ya no Gotoshi. All I can say is they are both amazing. Great work and keep it up.

Amazing. Simply and utterly amazing. I loved it, and your ending was phenomenal. I'll check out your other fics too!

I think this is the best story I've ever read in the Sailor Moon FF world... which is saying something, cuz I've read A LOT... A superbly fabulous job; I can hardly put it into words. I loved Queen Serenity's mysteriousness and her words, and Pluto's response to the Time question... plus the Diamond/Beryl stuff! You weave an enticing fic, and one thing I love about it is it is "Unexpected". Just like your title! I have no clue what is going to happen next, and I certainly wasn't expecting Beryl (though I was suspicious about Diamond). I personally had thought it would be Ann and Alan! You are such a good writer.. :-) Anyways, I'm off to finish this story and hopefully read your others!
Angel

hmm, i think it's ann and ail.. but i could be wrong... we'll see! great chappy; what else? :-)

Oh my god! Awesome! The tracking device part, the fight, the hiding away, the attacks, the baby, the Senshi, the humor, the romance, the excitement... I love it all! You are such an awesome writer and have me on the edge of my seat!

AWESOME! I luv ur fights and reactions and humor!

O next chappy sounds good...
i loved the outer's reactions, simply priceless! and the attack was awesome; loved the fighting scene!! :-)

Aw! OMG i loved the last part. "All four girls, after staring for a moment, broke their promise" Tee hee I knew they would! :-)

OMFG THAT WAS SO HILARIOUS! I was laughing so hard when Raye was "drowning" lol! hahahahaha! i love it!

AW... that is so cute! I'm lovin this fic!

I especially loved the ending of the story and the thought behind making Amara cry. A beautiful fic. Hope you continue to write more amazing stories!

~Kallie~