I read through the reviews in chapter one and though "Strong Bad and The Cheat" (one of the reviewers) was a bit harsh, I have to agree with them. Reading just the first chapter of your story was painful. There are a ton of people who will over look such things (mainly because they write the same) but for those of us that don't and can't, your story needs a lot of editing.

HOLY CRAP ! took me awhile to finish
reading your story but that's okay.
all i wanted to say was that ...
HOLY SHIZZNATCH ! GREAT STORY !

- xLY

What an amazing story! I really admire writers who can write more than one chapter and you are one of them. Such a sad ending but I'm looking forward to your sequel. Keep up the great work. Also, just gotta mention that I loved the Harry/Cho interactions, they were sweet and funny.

While reading this story, I've played DJ between the chapters uploading (takes forever) and I though of this song. It's called Same Ground by Kitchie Nadal
My love it's been a long time
Since I cried and left you
Out of the blue

Its hard leaving you when I never want to
Self denial is game. Strange I'd never wanted to
Til there was you. Because I have learned that love is beyond what humans can imagine. The more it plays the more I've got to let you go.

Chorus:
That's why I don't understand
It's why I'm feeling so bad now
When I know it was my idea
Should have just denied the truth and lied
Why am I the only one standing stranded on the Same ground

Totally how I think Ginny feels. You made me think of my favorite song.

Anyway, there's an evil plot that involves Harry knocking up Cho Chang. That's the only problem I have is that everyone uses impregnated. No slang.

good story, except for the fact that you made harry into a mega super ultra wuss lol

I am about hal-way through reading the story and I must say at the very begining I was a bit shocked that cho was pregnant but I will finish reading the story soon and so far I LOVE it!

I think that your story was very kool. It had everything that a harry potter book would have love, aventure, mystery. You should keep writing. You should make a book of your own. If you do e-mail me and ill be sure to read it.

don't kill another little potter please?

One of the best fics ive ever read on this site. i love harry and cho together and this baby was fukin awsome! great mind you have. holla

This story is just great. I really enjoyed it, hoping for a sequel, if there is going to be one.

Although part of me really wants to "read" that Harry and Cho got together - I think the bad "ending"(?) is unique to this story. And who knowns? you might decide keeping it tragedy.

It's one of the fav. stories I read, not to mention one of the best H\C Story ever.

P.S: Don't compete luck, if you know what I mean.

I hope Harry and CHo end up together because they are my fav couple. Love the story so keep posting

great story. by the way LeBlanc?

Quite good, but I think it should be listed as Romance/Drama and not Romance/Humor. It was well written and it kept the interest, although there were some points where you dragged it a bit too much.

Frankly, I liked the end. Sad, yes, but good. A bit too quick, maybe. Everything fell into place in two chapters, when it had taken more than 30 to get there.

I feel very bad for Harry and Cho. I hope you decide to keep that couple in the sequel. There are so few stories with them together, or even where Cho is treated nicely. She's always been 'the girl who is trying to steal Harry from Ginny (or Hermione)'. I wish JKR hadn't taken the same path with her.

ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! :D

i just feel sad that there aint too many HPCC fics here :( im equally sad that HP OOTP did not give them any room for something more... but i enjoyed your fic and replaced my longing for more HPCC action :)

im quite excited for the sequel :) please get them together... they went thru too much not to be together...

we will be waiting for your sequel... :D

cheerios!
mc

Have I reviewed this story as I always read this story over and over again. I HATE YOU HARRY POTTER! You are too mean to poor Cho, she is so upset and you love that Ginny! How could you?!! You broke her heart and nothing is worse than that!Cho is now so upset and what you go with that evil girl who hate her? Ginny! I hope you keep up with the pairing of Cho/Harry please? I don't want to see Cho unhapy I like her alot she my favourite character and I think that if she is upset she could kill herself. ( just a thought) please make Cho happy in the next story!